Crash

Bang crash hear that boom wow, what could it be It wasn't you, nor me deafening screams all around no silence can be heard no, know where to be found people, chaos everywhere blood and screaming in the cold night air my heart is racing i look about tears come to me so many people in agony im afraid, oh yes indeed whats it like is speed fun now look around, take a look the blood, the screams i see your tears they well up inside sorry you say so scared you are six months on inside you're cell one life broken to you its hell

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Skat A

Date: 2/5/2016 5:34:00 PM

Lisa, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT

Richard Nnoli

Date: 8/31/2014 1:51:00 PM

What a brilliant write, hmmm...., so deep, and touching, nice write, Lisa Richard

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 8/22/2014 10:42:00 PM

You managed to express a terrible accident in a very poetic way Lisa..I love your style...keep writing :) Ana

Lisa Duggan
Date: 8/23/2014 7:43:00 AM

Thank you Ana for taking the time to read and comment :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/22/2014 1:44:00 PM

Dear Lisa, The chaos, blood and screaming can be found everywhere, especially when we watch the news. Indeed, it's very frightening. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I'm so glad you are earning your "apple computer" by contributing here. Well done, dear. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Lisa Duggan
Date: 8/23/2014 7:44:00 AM

Thank you and yes i certainly am earning my Apple Mac LOL

Vera Duggan

Date: 8/21/2014 7:38:00 PM

Lisa my darling what an explosive write, I knew you had it in you, so proud of you my dear....Luv..........Mum.xxxxxx.

Lisa Duggan
Date: 8/21/2014 11:47:00 PM

Thanks mum x x x x

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/21/2014 12:16:00 PM

an in the moment poem that has a story of interest, well done

Lisa Duggan
Date: 8/21/2014 11:48:00 PM

thanks for taking the time to read and comment Frederic

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/21/2014 12:12:00 PM

Wonderful n powerful write Lisa! Haste making waste, life lost both ways! Hv a blessed day dear!

Lisa Duggan
Date: 8/21/2014 11:49:00 PM

Than you Dr Upma kind of you to comment

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/21/2014 9:10:00 AM

Takes less than a second for a drunk driver to end other people's lives. My cousin was killed over 17 years ago by a drunk driver.. A great write my friend! Your free verse is great!!! Message is great!!

Lisa Duggan
Date: 8/21/2014 11:50:00 PM

Thank you Robert for taking the time to read and comment i appreciate it

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2014 5:12:00 AM

- Just in few seconds .... life destroyed ..... both for themselves and others - Lisa, a powerful and well written poem! - Have a enjoyable day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Duggan
Date: 8/21/2014 11:51:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise for taking the time to read and comment

Lisa Duggan
Date: 8/21/2014 6:45:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise its very nice of you to take the time to read and comment