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Cradle of Thread

It happened when I was not noticing, yet I was so close, that had I not have been here, disregarded as I was, I would missed the weaving, from branch to branch, a spider’s thread, meshed with the sun, as if spinning itself with velvet fingers. A net, cradled over the leaves, slung low over the dew. Evidence in the spring daylight, of a chore needing to be done, skillfully being crafted, trembling in the soft breeze, as the sun fondles each delicate strand. This is not new, or kept a secret, but I can't help but wish, for someone here, to share my excitement, and to also recognize, the magic of the silver thread and a miracle in the making. ______________________________ For Suzanne's Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/24/2013 7:58:00 PM
Excellent sharing of the wonder of the spider's creation, Carrie, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/20/2013 6:50:00 PM
We are all caught in the web! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/20/2013 6:25:00 PM
By far the best of class..you are so talented. BG
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Date: 6/20/2013 4:27:00 PM
Carrie congratulations on you fine win. An fabulous poem. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/20/2013 12:00:00 PM
Those webs are fasinating to look at ..Creative way to go in writing this winner for the contest...Congrats on your awesome win..Sara
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Date: 6/20/2013 11:02:00 AM
Congrats on the win. Their webs are so exquisite.
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Date: 6/20/2013 8:15:00 AM
Beauty shared is that much more magnificent. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/20/2013 7:23:00 AM
Great congrats on your superb win, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/20/2013 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations and thank you for entering my competition, I enjoyed reading all the entries so much. Yours was outstanding. SuZ
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Date: 2/7/2012 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Paula Swanson's "Thread" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2012 8:43:00 AM
Congrats, Carrie. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Great job. Best to you and yours. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/7/2012 2:53:00 AM
Congratultions Carrie, very nice x
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Date: 2/6/2012 10:20:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie. A wonderfully original idea on the theme.
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Date: 2/3/2012 9:21:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Carrie. Great imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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Date: 2/3/2012 8:08:00 PM
You have created beauty and wonder in something most find a nuisance. As the sun fondles each delicate strand ~ lovely imagery. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/3/2012 7:22:00 PM
Very creative and lovely poem Carrie, good luck in the contest, best wishes .Elizabeth
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