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Cracking As Broken Toys

Picking up my phone, the voice recalls my memories Sweet talker across the line, hey... it's been a while Days running, things change, here we are aloof in our boundaries Trapped within our history, now we play the role of our guile  The way you speak is like negating the past Sweet talker across the line, hey... it's been a while Hurting each other became the story of our last The lampblack dwell beneath the wounds, torn by the pain that we cost The way you speak is like negating the past We tired in our drama, we trapped in our anger loft Burnt by the old grudge, how can we fix this dust? The lampblack dwell beneath the wounds, torn by the pain that we cost Standing limp on the ruin of us Now we are broken toys if you still want to play, it's up to you Burnt by the old grudge, how can we fix this dust? Still in the past memory I flew Now we are broken toys if you still want to play, it's up to you Picking  up my phone, the voice recalls my memories Days running, things change, here we are aloof in our boundaries

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Date: 3/9/2013 7:00:00 PM
A lot of abstract images here. I like the implications of a relationship that used to be spectacular... but now it's something like old toys... you could pick them up and play with them again, but because of time passing it just doesn't feel the same anymore... "Now we are broken toys if you still want to play, it's up to you"... it's hard to describe how that line makes me feel. Sad? Nostalgic? Hopeful?... poetry to chew on methinks.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/9/2013 7:14:00 PM
for that verse, it's like an option that you could choose, sometimes a friendship not always been that good, when you already take a choice to play it, play it good, if you prefer not, drop it otherwise you make it worse :) nice to have a brilliant thought by you Tim, hug, yanny
Date: 2/11/2013 5:13:00 AM
hey, nicely done Yanny.
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Date: 2/4/2013 4:40:00 PM
Wow, this is....I dont even know how to descrbe how this makes me feel. Its beautiful, flowing, wonderful, touching. And its so true for me.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/4/2013 4:56:00 PM
Thank you Jay :D,it is really nice to have such an uplifting comment by you, wishing you a great and wonderful day :D - hug,yanny
Date: 1/27/2013 2:30:00 AM
Wow Yanny, this is different, like the way you have wrote this poem, the sadness comes through, love your first line secong stanza,, almost fate demands... again wonderful poetry...
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/27/2013 9:47:00 PM
Thank you Harry, my fave line is "The way you speak is like negating the past", this is somehow pop into my mind, and really glad that you also like this poem, wishing you a great and wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
Date: 1/25/2013 12:36:00 PM
Another favorite, I am so proud of you Yanny. I like how you express yourself in this form. Absolutely stunning. I hope this is a flight go imagination and not something you are currently dealing with. Hugs your fried Rick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2013 3:41:00 PM
I am good Yanny, sweet dreams lovely poet Friend.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/25/2013 9:53:00 PM
Hello Rick :D, thank you for visiting, your comment is really uplifting, glad to have you here too, sorry for the long absent, still focusing on my work in here :D, hopefully you are doing well there :D have a great day :) - hug, yanny
Date: 1/23/2013 3:40:00 AM
If it's a friendship that you want to have, "glue it together" ..... good friends are nice to have. - A very good poem Yanny. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/23/2013 4:36:00 AM
If only it could be solve by a glue, just wondering how many glue would it takes to fix those broken tiny pieces :p, but your words are really into me thank you Anne, I appreciate it so much :)- hug, yanny

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