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my heart has been broken and my soul cracked many times I have been knocked down life has stabbed me with with daggers that still bleed I have fallen to pieces life can be very cruel and words and jabs can leave one fragmented and unsure childhood was not a very happy journey there was too much grief and death my wounds are hidden for I wear a mask of happiness each day if people hurt me I become dark silent where I fold my wings but through teachings philosophical I have studied and found a great truth a belief system and a code of morals I asked God he said put your faith in the bible buddha says live in now and tao said have calm patience so I have a new ideology path can handle pain but think I will always be a bit cracked ________________________ March 07, 2023 Poetry/Suzette Prime/Cracked Inside Copyright Protected, ID 03-1529-954-07 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Suzette Prime form was created by Suzette Richards of PS Written for the Standard contest, Cracked sponsor, Anthony Biaanco, Judged 03/17/2023 Seventh Place

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Valsa George

Date: 3/10/2023 1:33:00 AM

Deep wounds may heal , but will leave a scar. Life is not easy for anyone.... ! It gives us an assorted mass of sobs , sighs, giggles and smiles. From what I understand you have suffered more from the loss of dear ones. That pain cannot be easily removed. But your faith in God's saving grace will make you stronger. A touching poem, dear Constance

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2023 5:12:00 PM

Valsa, thank you so much for the beautiful comment and compliment, blessings, Constance

Paige Hind

Date: 3/9/2023 10:53:00 AM

Hope your wounds are on the mend. Introspective work!

Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2023 10:20:00 PM

Paige, thank you so much for the visit, comment and encouragement, blessings, Constance

Suzette Richards

Date: 3/7/2023 11:25:00 PM

many can identify with this excellent poem. Constance. I, for one, would rather be "cracked" than not have experienced Life at all. Regards, Suzette

Suzette Richards
Date: 3/8/2023 6:39:00 AM

You are welcome:))

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2023 3:37:00 AM

Suzette, thank you so much for the compliment and great comment, thank you for creating this wonderful form, blessings, Constance

Stephan McBride

Date: 3/7/2023 7:05:00 PM

Indeed for a long time this world had taught me to reject God, then through His guidance to reveal this is where He sent His son to save us from, thankfully God had mercy to flood through the crack of light my soul was longing for, still not easy now seeing how this world rejects the only way to find inner peace, love, and joy, and what God placed within, May God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2023 3:39:00 AM

Stephan, thank you for the compliment and for the wonderful comments. It is so easy to let God shine into ones life, just invite him, blessings, Constance

Stephan McBride
Date: 3/7/2023 7:11:00 PM

Sad world my friend but without a doubt you are here to write for us all, great strength coming from within, knowledge and wisdom that you have to share with all, to keep fighting, seeking the truth and moving forward

Stephan McBride
Date: 3/7/2023 7:08:00 PM

Do not conform to the pattern of this world, but be transformed by the renewing of your mind. Then you will be able to test and approve what God’s will is—his good, pleasing and perfect will. Romans 12:2 NIV

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/7/2023 4:50:00 PM

I pray those cracks fill with beauty. My heart always goes out to you!

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2023 3:42:00 AM

Kim, thank you so much for the lovely comment, blessings, Constance