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Below is the poem entitled Cracked which was written by poet Jillian Veitenheimer. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Rooted to the Earth 
Your stare unmoving 
Infatuated with mirrored beauty 
That ignores your worship 
Cursed to your destined place 
Paralyzed by desire 
Loneliness engulfs the heart 
Punishment for those you broke 
Sculptured resemblance alongside 
A hand gripping your psyche 
Dissolving similar to your physique 
Fractured egg ventilates your ego 
There a flower blooms 
Lesson imparted by the gods 
Conceited are not blessed with love 
Thus the metamorphosis of Narcissus 
Poem based of painting by 
Metamorphosis of Narcissus (1937). Salvador Dalí 

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  1. Date: 5/11/2013 9:23:00 PM
    Jillian :-) Congratulations with having your poem Featured this week. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 4:22:00 AM
    Beautifully done... Terry