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Cracked

They said he'd cracked, like a jar in the wind, ajar to within. Grumbling gears in an attic of a mind, cranked with the resiliency of an old steam engine, chugging along. Muddy cigar for the failures, basement couch for the come-backs, after being knocked off a hundred times, the podium has never had this many scratches, climbs back up every time, but gallows are never very accommodating.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/7/2011 5:49:00 PM
I appriciate it Laura and Carol, thanks! I honestly didnt consider this a good quality piece but you guys renowed my faith :)
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:52:00 AM
Shahroz I really enjoyed this featured poem congratulations! Laura :)
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Date: 9/6/2011 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Shahroz. Love, Carol
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