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Crabby

When wrinkles start appearing Getting deeper by the day With liver spots accruing And the hair is going grey The early morning aches and pains A stomach growing flabby The crows feet and the flatulence No wonder you feel crabby

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/25/2011 8:39:00 PM
Haha! Cute, John. congrats on your placement in the contest. Kim
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Date: 11/24/2011 8:29:00 AM
Cute and very real. Congratulations John
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:19:00 AM
JOHN, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! AND CONGRATULATIONS IN THE contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.
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Date: 11/23/2011 5:56:00 PM
sheesh thought you were looking in my mirror at me this morning! Cool poem. Congratulations to you John.
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Date: 11/23/2011 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest today John W. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2011 9:49:00 AM
Been there. Done that. I think of these things as my insignia of rank. I must be getting close to being a general
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Date: 10/3/2011 7:38:00 PM
ha! clever and very amusing. too bad it's also very true!
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Date: 8/26/2011 2:07:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today John W. I love poetry that is written from the heart as I believe that is where the best poetry comes from. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with Love, Good Health and loads of Inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2011 4:15:00 AM
burp :)
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Date: 8/26/2011 4:00:00 AM
LOL! Thanks for making me smile this morning with this witty write! Best wishes Em :)
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