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Cowboys In the Badlands

The red sun cuts the gray sky like a dull knife Morning, after fighting a long fireless night We need to get to the Hole in the Wall The Big Horn Mountains are cold in moonlight We robbed a bank a couple days ago A small dusty town in Johnson County Traveled in circles for hours on end Trying to elude the posse, looking for bounty Now at the edge of a long narrow canyon That leads to the Hole where we can hide Dust in the distance is moving towards us Time to saddle up, begin to ride We have one cause, to escape the law Many a time we've been shot and bled Rustling cattle and robbing banks our call If we're caught, we'll be hung or shot dead Tonight we'll find safety in the hidden cabin We'll rest with the money we just stole Drink some whiskey and play some cards Living life as an outlaw in this rocky hellhole

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/22/2014 1:24:00 PM
Congratulations, Frederic, you never disappoint.
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Date: 10/22/2014 11:44:00 AM
Fine story, congrats on the win,
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Date: 10/22/2014 10:47:00 AM
See, I told you it would do well! Congrats from your "hole in the wall" friend. BG
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Date: 10/22/2014 6:06:00 AM
Great story - many congrats on your win Frederic:-) hugs Jan
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Date: 10/21/2014 11:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Frederic. I found your poem very much like the cowboy flicks I love. Especially the last stanza.
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Date: 10/8/2014 4:02:00 PM
Dear Frederic, I think you captured the action that the sponsor wanted very well in this cowboy poem. I love poems that tell stories and really enjoyed this one! Best wishes in the contest. (Yes, mine was an entry too) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2014 12:39:00 AM
by the way, my hubbie is not a big talker, but I would say that our marriage is better these past ten years than ever it was in the first 30. so proposal or not, it has worked out!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/24/2014 9:14:00 AM
sounds like me, I'm not the big talker my wife is, but I do carry on the conversation
Date: 9/24/2014 12:38:00 AM
I think you did exactly what the contest called for. It is a very cowboy like poem!! I have been to the Badlands. Have you? Must have been something back in those days!!
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Date: 9/17/2014 4:24:00 PM
Well done ... should do well in the contest.... you seem to know a lot about the desert region around South Texas... I enjoye the color your words brought to the table .... Jake
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/19/2014 1:23:00 PM
Thank you John for your kindness, FYI..the hole in the wall and johnson county are not in Texas..
Date: 9/17/2014 3:47:00 PM
Great poem! I love your beautiful words.. I don't know how you all have the time and ambition to post such pieces of art EVERY day but I love reading them!! Lovely piece. Have a wonderful day, Juli-Michelle
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/19/2014 1:28:00 PM
thank you Juli for reading and your kindness, About time spent, I don't post every day and I'm old enough to be semi-retired, I do try to read poems on soup everyday but sometimes can't..I'm going to look up your poetry and see what you have written..
Date: 9/17/2014 12:14:00 PM
I love cowboy novels..this would fit in nicely. I have read a lot about the Hole In The Wall...good poem, will do well. BG
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/19/2014 1:33:00 PM
thank you Barbara, I hope to do well but I've noticed everytime someone reads a poem I've entered and they say it should do well, it never does and there are some contests I already know who will do well if they enter, but that's another story...what will be will be

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