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Cowboys In the Badlands

Cowboys in the Badlands The horses need be reined tightly lest they show better judgment and head back to the barn. The cowboys, driven by the dust cloud of following hoof beats, were less smart. A Gila monster smirks as they pass knowing what waits ahead is to be more painful than the rope they flee. Driven by the torments of a lost war, a lost home, a lost dream, they had lashed out at the hunger, fled the hovels of a shanty town and swore to exact payment any way possible. The consequences of the decision pursued them, consumed them, as they rested the horses. The horses must rest, they never would. They stood overlooking the badlands, shimmering heat’s forever fallacy, that somehow you would cross to safety, find an oasis, escape. Oh, you may escape the posse, maybe even the past, but you will not escape the bitterness of these bad lands and their unforgiving demands. Few have come here willingly, fewer have remained once tested by the dryness, the drought, the wind, sand, and anger of a land seeking to be left alone. And so they rode into the abyss of sand and stone leaving only the hoof prints of fading memory. Bandanas covered their faces, hat brims covered their eyes. They rode until the horses fell, unable to continue. Horseless, they staggered in the shifting sands laughing as they recalled staggering from the saloon on that awful night. The night they gave up, the night they gave in to the desperate desire to be free. A desire that was now to be fulfilled in these Bad Lands. For Isaiah Zerbst – Cowboys in the Badlands poetry contest 9/15/2014

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Date: 10/22/2014 6:36:00 PM
Congratulations John on your win. I loved it the first time I read it.
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Date: 10/22/2014 12:56:00 PM
My throat is sticking together, John. Great write, great win. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/22/2014 11:38:00 AM
Beautiful write, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/22/2014 10:39:00 AM
You gave us a true story of what it must have been like more often than not. Congrats on a fine win...BG
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Date: 10/22/2014 6:11:00 AM
very descriptive write many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/21/2014 10:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win John. You had great descriptions in your verse.
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John Lawless
Date: 10/21/2014 10:52:00 PM
Thank you Brenda your comments are always appreciated.
Date: 10/21/2014 9:26:00 PM
I like a lot of things in this poem; the word choice, the impact it has on me, the clarity. It is all fabulous! Only drawback is some lines are not in the right place. Generally, lines in poetry should be placed where it is convenient for a slight pause, almost like a comma.
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John Lawless
Date: 10/21/2014 10:51:00 PM
Thanks Isaiah, first for sponsoring the contest and secondly for your comment and input. I reread the poem a few times and can see where the line breaks could have been used to create a more enjoyable rhythm and read.
Date: 9/16/2014 5:02:00 PM
Great write I hope you do well in the contest. I took a different approach. After reading yours I am re-thinking mine. Giving this a 7 and I am adding you to my fav poets.
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John Lawless
Date: 9/16/2014 9:25:00 PM
Ah, Maurice, you flatter me. Thank you for reading my work and for your comments, interest and input is always appreciated.
Date: 9/16/2014 9:48:00 AM
Interesting write on the culture of the cowboys, John
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John Lawless
Date: 9/16/2014 9:23:00 PM
Thanks for checking in Dr. Mehta, there should be some interesting poems submitted for this contest.

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