Cowboy 2

He slowly dismounted his horse
As he glanced at her his soul drifted
Floating on a cloud amidst the summers heat
A vision of loveliness looking his way
His mind lingered on this breath taking beauty
He felt he was drowning in the deep ocean
Being pulled by those sea blue eyes.
He knew in that moment that she was his
Never before had he felt that magical moment
It was as if woken from a long deep dream
She smiled and the sun shone brighter
Her eyes twinkled like the starry heavens
This cowboy had just met love at first sight.

3/10/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 4/10/2013 9:41:00 AM
Every womans dream Phyllis, a romantic cowboy to wisk them away in the sunset. Great poem.Anne
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Date: 3/30/2013 5:24:00 PM
Ahhhh!!!Enjoyed this romantic work..Thanks for stopping by..I hope that this Easter will be the best one for you and your family up to this point in your life and may they only get better..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/28/2013 11:35:00 PM
hey, Phyllis. I think I will be here two hours trying to catch up. I hate when my work keeps me too busy to come here as much as I like to. Do you have any new poems? I hope you find time to write some!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/28/2013 9:25:00 AM
I want a Cowboy :) Love your poem Phyllis
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Date: 3/27/2013 7:54:00 AM
I think I was wishing for more... That definately means this won was quality stuff...
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Date: 3/23/2013 10:11:00 AM
Keep on going I want cowboy 3! This could be a romance of the decades. Jen
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Date: 3/20/2013 12:33:00 PM
This is warming, tender. I love it! Jen
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Date: 3/15/2013 4:54:00 PM
oh BOY a second cowboy!! I love when you write like this, sweetie. And TRY an ABC I know you can do it. They are fun poems to try. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/15/2013 3:10:00 PM
Wow to meet a cowboy and fall in love at first sight , sounds good to me as does this poem xx
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Date: 3/11/2013 7:22:00 AM
..... as a prince who comes riding on his horse in the sunset ..... Lovely poem Phyllis! - Wish you a nice new week. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/11/2013 5:18:00 AM
I like this poem very much :)
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