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He’d been too yellow to admit he was having an affair Susie was seething and started screaming at his deception She’d found long blonde hairs in her husband’s Cadillac car Slowly she poured paint stripper over its ochre paintwork Photo 3 Chosen – Contest Yellow Sponsored by Silent One 03~03~16

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:25:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2016 7:37:00 PM

Many thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 3/6/2016 12:01:00 AM

Congratulations Jan on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS

Jan Allison
Date: 3/8/2016 1:16:00 PM

Thanks Hans:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/5/2016 11:56:00 PM

Congrats Jan for the Nice Smart Poem. Very Good Composition to win. I missed the contest I could not avail of Internet for two days. Hugs. Anisha

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2016 12:00:00 AM

Oh sorry you missed the contest Anisha they close very quickly and I have missed several recently too:-( hugs Jan xx

Andrew Crisci

Date: 3/5/2016 1:24:00 PM

My congratulations on your superb win in Silent One contest, " Yellow ". Betrayal and revenge a good theme for a great Thriller. One can hide an affair, but soon or later he or she will be caught. I have enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Hugs, Andrew.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2016 12:00:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Andrew:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/5/2016 11:59:00 AM

Hi Jan...congrats on this 'yellow' win! Have been off Soup for some days due to a lingering cold; I'm still running a temperature, but making an effort to read some poetry. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2016 11:59:00 PM

We are both ailing Paul - get well soon :-( I managed to hurt my back - 10 painkillers a day don't touch the pain - hey ho will mail you :-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/5/2016 10:50:00 AM

Serves him right. Like they say the difference between a pit bull and a woman scorned...Lipstick!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2016 11:55:00 PM

LOL:-) hugs Jan xx

Sathya Babu

Date: 3/5/2016 12:59:00 AM

A very Nice write.....many congratulations on your win Jan........:-)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2016 10:20:00 AM

Thanks Sathya:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/4/2016 9:37:00 PM

A really great one Jan! Congratulations on your top placement with this witty piece! #7

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2016 10:58:00 PM

Thanks Connie I had fun with this poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/4/2016 5:15:00 PM

Back to say congratulations for your win, Jan. Have a great weekend. Peace my lady:)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2016 5:16:00 PM

Thanks Daniel hope you have a good weekend too:-) hugs jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/4/2016 4:17:00 PM

a witty take on the rather bizarre image, not easy to think of something for this pic! congrats on your win in the contest :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2016 4:18:00 PM

I agree the image was bizarre Charlotte I guess that is why it appealed to my muse lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 3/4/2016 4:12:00 PM

Jan, congrats on your placement in the contest!! Very clever as always :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2016 4:18:00 PM

Thanks so much LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/4/2016 2:42:00 PM

Great interpretation on that prompt, Jan! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2016 4:08:00 PM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/4/2016 2:15:00 PM

I'm not surprised, congratulations Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2016 2:24:00 PM

Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/4/2016 10:41:00 AM

Well you have me chuckling with this one. The yellow sucker deserved it.lol love phyl

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2016 12:17:00 PM

He sure did Phyllis - have heard of this happening in reality:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2016 8:33:00 AM

Way to go, Jan, you got into it on time. I had mine all ready to post. I felt there was more than enough time to get mine into the contest when I went to bed last night. Just woke up and found it all filled. DANG!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2016 12:16:00 PM

I've missed 2 contests lately not felt much like writing and the contests fill so quickly but I managed to so pen this today :-) hugs Jan xx