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Covered Silence

Empath whispers hold covered silence desires whisk away with the moon earth tone times of trepidation dragged off and hidden in the ruin pain stains blush red under pretense separate flights of frighten leaves float frustration fills the noon snipped strings hang on acceptance what's left of you looking back forgiven specks eyes don't lie aspirations exhaust breaths rest hearts reaching past the black gasps aghast screams seams split in two 09/08/17 picture contest

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Date: 9/21/2017 11:57:00 PM
Yup a sure winner, congrats I don't know if I've ever seen you enter a contest, but this was a great one. Hey what's up with DT, I soupmailed him but no response
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Date: 9/15/2017 9:37:00 PM
Back to congratulate you, well done my friend...
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Date: 9/15/2017 6:54:00 AM
BRILLIANT!!! Congrats Sir Tim!!!
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Date: 9/13/2017 7:16:00 PM
An awesome write Tim. Congratulations on your win! :) Susan
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Date: 9/13/2017 3:50:00 PM
back to congratulate you on your win, Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/13/2017 8:53:00 AM
Tim, CONGRATULATIONS on your win with this outstanding and beautifully penned poem
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Date: 9/13/2017 6:52:00 AM
Congrats Tim!
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Date: 9/10/2017 11:00:00 AM
Nicely done, Tim... I love it... luck in the contest Hugs dear friend ~`*
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Date: 9/10/2017 10:10:00 AM
What picture? What contest? What matter? With this you are bound to win.
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Date: 9/9/2017 3:50:00 AM
Excellent Tim...fav...Seren
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Date: 9/8/2017 11:25:00 PM
Amazing is all I can say, you have portrayed this picture so well, you had me at the first line, and this poem is a fav!
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Date: 9/8/2017 9:29:00 PM
You creative types getting so much from this picture. OH MY, what an awesome write, Tim.
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Date: 9/8/2017 5:50:00 PM
Unique take on the painting--well done Tim!
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Date: 9/8/2017 2:02:00 PM
I have to commend you for covering that ground quite well, Tim. Snipping the rest of those strings might be a great idea ;-)
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Date: 9/8/2017 1:09:00 PM
Terrific interpretation Tim, it's either exactly as you portray it or a really bad sneeze. Best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 9/8/2017 12:35:00 PM
- The fear is reflected in her eyes, excellent written Tim - Luck in the contest - Wishing you a happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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