Couple Arguing

I'm here Need beer Agree Not me You sigh I cry Deny I try You scheme I scream You're mad I'm sad No team It seem A pig You dig Deceive Just leave! Dorian Petersen Potter Copyright@2014 September.20.2014

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/23/2014 8:38:00 AM

A nice dramatic scene you have created, Dorian

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/23/2014 9:46:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Ram! Always a pleasure. Love and light! xxx D.

Tim Smith

Date: 9/22/2014 3:53:00 PM

I love footles....you shout...get out.......you cheat...hit street.......bad spouse...big louse .....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2014 4:52:00 PM

We still can't stop footling around Tim:-) hugs your footle partner in crime LOL xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/22/2014 4:41:00 PM

Thank you Tim! Yours made laugh, very nice ones. .... Hugs to you too my friend. xxxx D.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2014 3:47:00 PM

great footles Dorian - maybe make the first one I'm here ... need beer so it rhymes:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2014 4:55:00 PM

nor me LOL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 9/22/2014 4:54:00 PM

You know I can't resist a good footle.....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2014 4:48:00 PM

I'm so glad you liked it and used it Dorian:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/22/2014 4:47:00 PM

Thank you Jan for comment and all. Oooopsss! I missed to rhyme in that line.... Wrong made a mistake with that, but thank you for letting me know about it. I fixed it and thanks so much for your idea line... I loved it so I used it, hope you don't mind my friend... So it was too funny to overlook it. Lol.... Love and light! Hugs! xxxx D.