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Countryside Bliss

Low under the blue A canopy of clad clouds Shadow a meadow Inspired by Raul Moreno’s Haiku contest!

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Nadia Shahwan

Date: 8/9/2009 2:54:00 PM

Pretty dicsription.

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/3/2009 1:58:00 PM

Wow! This is quite a delightful poem. It's very light and pretty, if those words can describe poetry. That's the only thing that comes to mind.

Sue Mason

Date: 7/27/2009 1:40:00 PM

Love this title, Laura. Adds greatly to the imagery. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2009 12:53:00 PM

Laura, congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/25/2009 12:58:00 PM

exceptional haiku! exceptional recognition! congrats! Laura! jimbo

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 7/25/2009 10:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Laura. ~Trudy~

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/25/2009 6:44:00 AM

Lovely images this poem creates...well deserving this win!! Congratulations, Laura! ~ Carrie

Brian Strand

Date: 7/25/2009 2:50:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Laura.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/25/2009 2:04:00 AM

Laura, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/22/2009 11:46:00 PM

GREAT DESCRIPTION OF A COUNTRY DAY

Brian Strand

Date: 7/8/2009 12:51:00 AM

Like the allieration in L2 Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

C. E. Mcmullin

Date: 7/7/2009 4:18:00 PM

Ahhh, the competition, stiffens!!! Thank-you for your always valued comments, and I will keep writing poetry as long as you keep writing poetry, as your talents glimmer with each new submission- Love, poet butterfly

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/6/2009 5:25:00 PM

loved the mystery and romance of the last line! Luck to you! Light & Love

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/6/2009 4:04:00 PM

Wow! This is really cool. I can see the imagery just like it's outside my window. Great job! ~Joseph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/6/2009 12:52:00 PM

Very nice haiku, Laura!

Mary Duhart

Date: 7/5/2009 6:06:00 AM

great picture of the country side. Short and sweet and thanks for commenting on my work also.

Jim Fish

Date: 7/4/2009 11:44:00 AM

Reminds me of yesterday afternoon. Nice! Very nice! Reckon that's why you a favorite. Thanks again... ~<><

Krista Kurth

Date: 7/2/2009 3:16:00 PM

Laura, great imagery and use of words. I love the illiterative phrase "canopy of clad clouds". Good luck in the contest. Krista

Date: 7/2/2009 12:37:00 PM

I love the view in this one. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for the kind comment on my blog. You made my day! Blessings to you. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/1/2009 6:26:00 PM

This is such a wonderful entry to Raul's contest, Laura...a perfectly lovely haiku!! Good luck !~ Carrie

Heidie Buys

Date: 7/1/2009 3:51:00 PM

Oh Laura, this is stunning, creative and so very well written. Good luck with the contest. Love Heidie

James Fraser

Date: 7/1/2009 3:11:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Laura>>James

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/1/2009 2:08:00 PM

great capture of Raul's pic! Laura! jim