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Country Life

The night descends with a button down moon against a powder blue comforter sky, fluffed and puffed with the down of seed cat and nine tails bursting with pride. The mothers have called the dinnertime and the scent of soups on the wind, sneakers are stacked by the backdoor, the dog knows, it time to come in. The table once set is abandoned for the trays by the big screen TV, and autumn gourds and chrysanthemums abandoned on the tables display. Soon, silhouettes form on the den walls and children are hurried to bed, with the call of a wild coyote they run diving beneath their bedspreads. All the human light dims, as they hideout and starlight covers their ceiling, Mom has places plastic stars of Venus and Mars to usher in dreams, as they’re drifting. Oh, the night with its warmth will not last and soon the chill dawn will arrive with the call of a neighborhood rooster, ah, the country’s the place to be alive!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/1/2011 8:47:00 PM
Wow Debbie I love this one, it gives a real sense of the homeliness of the country. As you read you almost feel that you're wrapped in those bedspreads and comforters. A brilliant piece, really glad this was the last I read before bedtime. Thanks for sharing. Simon
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Date: 10/9/2011 3:27:00 PM
You are really brightening up my night here Debbie, great write for me:) i love its simplicity..thanks for posting.!
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Date: 10/7/2011 2:40:00 PM
What a great mood you create here, Deb. Twilight brights out the dreamers as well as the demons (in this case just a coyote) as children hide beneath the covers. How cool that mom has placed plastic "Venus and Mars" on the ceiling along with the stars. I bet you are a great mom. If this is for the time of day contest, you have a winner, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/7/2011 1:37:00 PM
well debbie you have written a great piece here. leaves a good taste in my mind of the country P.D.
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Date: 10/7/2011 9:42:00 AM
Thank you for making me feel at home. Tony
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