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Crack that whip, jerk the line, Let's start dancing it's no time to dine. First you holler, then you sing All join hands and make a ring. Now if you please circle wide, spread right out like an old cow hide. Feed the Hogs, brand the calf, Swing your honey once and a half Now you switch on the heel and toe Come gals and cowboys, don't be slow. Allemande left with the corner maid, Meet your own and promenade. Everybody swing and whirl Swing 'round and 'round with your pretty little girl. Do si do don't you know, You can't grab a rabbit until there's a snow. Bow to you partner and the corner miss, To the opposite lady just blow a kiss. Chicken in the bread pan scratching out gravel, get your maid & away you travel. Lassies to your seats and gents you foller Thank the fiddler and kiss the caller Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Contest Name: HOE DOWN Collaboration By Seren Roberts/ Maurice Yvonne 11~10~2014

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Date: 11/5/2014 10:55:00 PM
I would bet that you know your hoe down dances. Great fun and a great win. Love,Joyce
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Date: 11/5/2014 7:58:00 PM
This was so great, Maurice -- wonderful appropriate rhythm, and the words were perfect. Congrats on your fine 1st place win on this one! Sandra
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Date: 11/5/2014 7:35:00 PM
I loved this one ..Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/5/2014 7:14:00 PM
brilliant pen Maurice a very high standard was set in this contest by you all congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 11/5/2014 6:34:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/4/2014 1:27:00 AM
congrats to you and Seren for placing 1st results have not posted for some reason waiting to hear from soup so hopefully they will show soon also congrats on 3rd place with Mystic Rose hugs
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Date: 11/2/2014 7:49:00 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed this hoe down....Great write...
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Date: 11/2/2014 8:05:00 AM
Maurice, you've got the words and rhythm down pat! Love it! I could feel my toe tapping. Good luck!
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Date: 11/1/2014 1:08:00 PM
hahaha, this is wonderful! I too have done this one with someone that asked me last week and soon I will be showing it now that Shadow has changed her rules and allowed both poets to enter the same poem. you guys really kept to that theme of the square dancing music. I did the same thing, Maurice, in my part of this collaboration . I mentioned the terms from square dancing. I had to be the "boy" in grade school when we practiced. But I LOVED square dancing. Good luck, you guys dis a great job.
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Date: 11/1/2014 1:07:00 PM
yeee haaaaaa great write Seren and Maurice - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 11/1/2014 11:32:00 AM
Loved this one....good luck my freind
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