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Country Bound Preterition

I'm just an old country boy City life's not for me In the country I felt free This city life is chokin me I got my clothes packed in a matchbox A pocket full of affairs My thumb up in the air And I'm country bound, I swear Had to hobo me a train This boy was country bound Far from that city crowd Back to my old hometown an original poem by Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/7/2016 10:46:00 AM
I agree, country life for me. : ) I have really enjoyed reading your poetry today and I look forward to coming back and reading more. I like cowboy poems. Jerry T. Curtis is really good at cowboy poems too.
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Date: 5/21/2016 8:54:00 AM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique..Thank you for entering my Preterition Contest..I am sorry for being so long in congratulating you but things have been happening here that I could not control..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 4/7/2016 8:44:00 PM
COUNTRY BOY MYSELF, BORN AND RAISED MY FRIEND. FINE POEM.. As Andrea stated-- cool write...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/7/2016 8:52:00 PM
Thank you Robert. Just trying to see if I understood what I was supposed to be writing. It was fun to write anyway, probably should add more. Peace my friend, we country boys have to stick together:) Sorry about OU. Oh well, there's always next year.
Date: 4/7/2016 8:39:00 PM
Daniel, I wrote one for this contest too and am still not sure it reads as preterition either. but what the heck. This is COOL!!!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/8/2016 7:23:00 AM
Went to read yours and could not find it.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/7/2016 8:49:00 PM
Using the song as an example this is what I came up with. We'll see. I'm glad you dropped in, at least now I don't feel like such an idiot. I wasn't really understanding of what I was supposed to be writing. Thanks for the smile:):)
Date: 4/7/2016 12:24:00 AM
how charming and well done, daniel; love it!... huggs!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/7/2016 7:45:00 AM
Thank you, nette.I always enjoy your friendly visits. Peace my friend:)

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