Count the Stars

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~Count The Stars~ (Free Verse) Dream about tomorrow But live for today Count all your blessings Like children count the stars Finding ways to make wishes And dreams come true for you Reminding you to keep believing In brigher days and in yourself too To give you Hope that is As certain as the sun May you always have an Angel by your side Helping you through all When we're born, we begin to die When we die, we begin to live I've seen the Light that shines through God's Divine Love for all to see. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2002-2015 June.28.2015

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Gary Bateman

Date: 7/1/2015 6:32:00 PM

Hello "D" -- This is a majestic and magical write in every respect. The stars are part of mankind's divine connection to the Heavens and to God Himself. Excellent Write!! 7 + FAV!! Best Wishes Always, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/3/2015 1:11:00 PM

Hello G!Thank you ever so kindly Gary,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it all G, your visit and the 7 + the fav, too,my dear friend.I hope that all is well with you and Ingrid:)Have a very happy 4th of July!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/1/2015 2:06:00 PM

Beautiful poem smiling with beautiful words. A 7 sure. Loved always my beautiful poetess friend,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/3/2015 1:17:00 PM

Thank you so kindly BL,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/28/2015 4:30:00 PM

A lovely write, Dorian! That last stanza just really spoke to me. Love, Kim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/3/2015 1:21:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Kim,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate it dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D