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Count Dracula's Spell

A walk upon dark, icy ground sends shivers down to bony spine; spared from the choke of death thus bound, breath comes whence love and hate entwine. The count, their lord, doth rise at dusk to terrorize blanched countryside His steely eyes slice trembling husk for drop of life, his brides abide. The stench of corpse wafts from dead night like sweet perfume on lover’s nape. Enchanted by his starless flight, he beckons with dark-wings of cape. Then, like the moth to burning flame, her fervor climbs for fangs drawn near. a scarlet kiss to seize with shame, Greed’s appetite expels stored fear. In harsh rays of the waking dawn, She curses beast, her longing’s doom. With conscience breaking charm and brawn, She lifts wood stake above his tomb. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 1/12/15 for Giorgio's Sketch a Fictitious Character II Contest *iambic tetrameter

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Date: 9/13/2015 8:30:00 AM
Well done on this piece of brilliant work, good rhythm, flow and well written. Keep up the good work. Would you care to look at my Facebook page that might be of interest: https://www.facebook.com/Raven3.gothic?ref=bookmarks Feel free to share it on this page as well.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 11/16/2015 9:28:00 PM
I'm not a writer of gothic poetry. This poem was written for a contest, but I'm so glad you liked it. :))
Date: 1/23/2015 4:50:00 PM
Her longing's doom. GREAT line. Finally I am seeing your poem. I can see how it rated high, Rhonda. It is truly an interesting read and a very well metered poem. BIG congrats.
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Date: 1/18/2015 1:37:00 PM
well done on this one Rhonda wonderful rhyme and rhythm. Easy read and message clearly presented.Congratulations.
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Date: 1/18/2015 10:49:00 AM
Hi Rhonda, stopping back to congratulate you for your 1st Place win! I knew it would be a winner from the start. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/18/2015 9:52:00 AM
Congrats Rhonda.
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Date: 1/17/2015 11:04:00 PM
I love this Rhonda,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:52:00 PM
So vivid, it's like watching a movie. Rhonda, nice win...PD
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Date: 1/17/2015 6:51:00 PM
Well written, good story, well done with that I say congratulations my poetic friend
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Date: 1/17/2015 5:39:00 PM
WOW RHONDA A FIRST PLACE WIN. THIS WAS A REALLY TOUGH CHALLENGE CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 1/17/2015 4:52:00 PM
Brilliant imagery so spooky and scary many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:45:00 AM
No one exceeds you in this form. So often I have a hard time understanding poets who use an old world style but yours though brilliant reads as easily as a children's book. You blow me away! A Fav!
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Date: 1/13/2015 8:43:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, wow...very scary, but so well written! I am sure Giorgio will love this! Best wishes for the contest! Sandra
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Date: 1/13/2015 7:56:00 PM
Pretty scary!!! stake the villain! Light & love
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Date: 1/13/2015 6:47:00 PM
OH MY MY MY!!!!!! You are going to shine in the contest, dear. Impeccable. Loved it...though scary things creep me out. I know...I'm a scardy cat! Hubby and daughter are away and it's almost 3:00 am. Thanks, Rhonda! ;) Hugs
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