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Count Dracula a haunting figure, through centuries alike desending on Whitby,an eerly thought, also a shuddering fright between my hometown Middlesbrough, and the seaside port the 199 steps to the abbey dwells a frightening thought Holidaying in Whitby, many times in our youth the tails of the night stalker,petrifyingly uncoath tucked up at night, a feeling of surreal Dracula would hound the streets, lives for the steal Preying on the vulnerable,gaining all their trust attacking unexpectedly,for blood that is a must his black cloak, gaunt profile,terrifying vitality protruding teeth over over ruddy lips, so remarkably The Transalvanian terroriser, 400 years ago puncturing the necks of ladies,blood does slowly flow evidently the Count,his resting place Whitby Abbey 1000`s do attend each year, a gothic ceremony.
1st in contest. Paul beadnall for : Sponsor Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. Contest Name "CREATURES" of the Night! 27/8/11 Sponsor Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. Contest Name "MAY MAGIC" (ALL 1ST PLACE WINS)

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Date: 9/7/2011 10:27:00 AM
Congragtulations on the win in the contest,Paul
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 2/22/2015 8:04:00 AM
just seen that i didnt offer my thanks.. 4 years too late, better late than never lol
Date: 9/6/2011 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your Placement in Linda-Marie's "CREATURES" contest Paul. Love, Carol
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/6/2011 9:12:00 AM
Thanks very Carol ALWAYS APPRECIATED.
Date: 9/5/2011 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in "CREATURES" of the Night! poetry contest sponsored by Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. CR
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/6/2011 9:11:00 AM
Thanks very much,Caryl appreciated.
Date: 9/4/2011 8:24:00 PM
Terrific write Mate congratulations on placing first in the contest, your mate Jack
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/5/2011 8:18:00 AM
CHEERS JACK ALWAYS APPRECIATED ,MATE ... BLESSINGS FROM PAUL.
Date: 9/4/2011 2:03:00 PM
"lives for the steal.." nice line. congratulations on your win!
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/4/2011 3:40:00 PM
THANKS VERY MUCH SUSAN,ALWAYS APPRECIATED BLESSINGS FROM PAUL
Date: 9/4/2011 8:48:00 AM
Yes, we loved Whitby too. Many congrats, Paul : )
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/4/2011 3:38:00 PM
CHEERS JACK, WHITBY WAS ALWAYS MY FAVOURITE PLACE FROM BEING A KID .. BLESSINGS FROM PAUL
Date: 9/4/2011 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on 1st place my friend, I am so proud to share that top spot with you, this is an amazing entry and well deservering of its honour~~
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/4/2011 3:35:00 PM
MY PLEASURE AND HONOUR TO SHARE MY FIRST PROPPER TOP PLACING WITH YOU,ALSO.. BLESSINGS FROM PAUL
Date: 9/4/2011 4:00:00 AM
hey Paul vongrats on your win, well done..David
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/4/2011 3:30:00 PM
CHEERS DAVID, BLESSINGS FROM PAUL
Date: 9/4/2011 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations Paul. a nice eerie read as was requested. Remind me not to go to Whitby for my holidays :-) regards Marg
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/4/2011 3:29:00 PM
THANKS VERY MUCH MARGRET,WHITBY HOLDS MANY HAPPY MEMORIES,BUT AT NIGHT... STICK TO THE ROADS AHAHA BLESSINGS FROM PAUL
Date: 9/4/2011 2:34:00 AM
this is tops!...cheers on your great win, paul! :) huggs!
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/4/2011 3:18:00 PM
THANKS VERY MUCH , NETTE ALWAYS APPRECIATED BLESSINGS FROM PAUL ;)-
Date: 9/4/2011 1:18:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS for this creepy description~~~~WOW~~ a deserving win my friend~~~thumbs up~~~*-* SMILE
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/4/2011 3:12:00 PM
THANKS ALOT JUN JUN,APPRECIATED.. BLESSINGS FROM PAUL .
Date: 9/3/2011 11:08:00 PM
The envelope please.....and the winner is....... Paul Beadnall!! Congrats on this top honor, Paul. A scary entry and historical write. Look forward to reading more of your work! Gwendolen
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/3/2011 11:53:00 PM
Thanks alot Gwen,nice one for the theatrical build up ;) ahaar. Enjoyed writing this 1 ;) blessing..Paul.
Date: 9/3/2011 9:41:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Paul
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/3/2011 10:46:00 PM
Cheers Dr.Ram always appreciated blessings.. Paul.
Date: 9/3/2011 6:29:00 PM
CONGRATS PAUL ON YOUR FIRST PLACE WIN WITH COUNT DRACULA.. A FAVORITE CREATURE OF MINE AND A SPLENDID ENTRY LUV..THANKXXX..
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/3/2011 10:44:00 PM
Thanls very much,Linda-Marie,appreciated as always. Cheers for the subject with blessings from Paul.
Date: 8/30/2011 11:01:00 AM
Indeed a frightening historical figure as well as a scarey fantasy. In truth Count Vlad The Impaler was quite mad you know. Great write here my friend. God Bless, JB
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/30/2011 2:43:00 PM
I have just read up on Vlad The Impaler,yes he was mad to put it mildly. Killing in the region of 40,000 to 100,000 Europeans throughout his time,thanks and blessings from Paul.
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/30/2011 12:59:00 PM
Nice one for adding extra historical knowledge.No i wasn`t aware of Vlad The Impaler being doo lally tap ;) might prove usefull in a pub quiz ahaha. blessings from Paul.
Date: 8/27/2011 12:45:00 PM
What a wonderful start to my weekend reading your wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing your writing Paul. Hope you are having a beautiful weekend. Love, Carol
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/30/2011 12:32:00 PM
Thanks alot Carol,glad you enjoyed and hope your weekend was the same . Blessings and love from Paul
Date: 8/27/2011 10:17:00 AM
It's nice and refreshing to read a poem on something other than Love or War! Keep up the creativity.
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/30/2011 12:27:00 PM
Cheers Karl,was a pleasure to write.Whitby being 30 miles from me,also can visualize knowledge.. blessings from Paul

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