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Count Down

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He' attired in magnificient apron
smiled to me
his.or mine eyes told
" hey ! i'm here"

Looked elegant without 
anxiety or can I say fear
instead of anxiety

He has some sort of 
FRAGRANCE

I gave up everything to be with you

MY OWN DESTINY

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  1. Date: 8/24/2012 11:35:00 AM
    try to develop rhyme.good now proceed saroj khan[sakha] india

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 1:24:00 AM
    WELCUM maya....hv a gud tym here in poetry soup!!!

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 5:52:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Maya. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

    devika Avatar maya devika
    Date: 8/13/2012 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carol
  1. Date: 8/8/2012 1:08:00 PM
    Very moving In line 3 maybe it should be "said" possibly

    devika Avatar maya devika
    Date: 8/13/2012 7:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your valuable suggestion..
  1. Date: 8/8/2012 12:53:00 PM
    Hi Maya welcome to poetry soup, look forward to more of this standard from you in future, all the best Owen

    devika Avatar maya devika
    Date: 8/13/2012 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You Owen