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Couldn'T 48

48. The lingering halt of half burnt day. Always the back of the throat tingles When you are caught at attention. I want to hide behind real smiles With sincere silk promises. I understand love, I burn with it. Hey I sit back and pontificate enough Filled with the heart stuff Now it should be hard to fantasize But I shouldn’t isn’t easy. In fact I didn’t.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/6/2012 11:40:00 AM
I was entertained by your last stanza, Autumn in conjunction with the first two that were so understandable. Interesting and enjoyable twist on things.
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