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Could It Be?

“Couldn’t we all just be right?” At the hind end of the elephant holding its tail; the first blind man said. “Rotten luck all of us being blind!” said the blind, seated man hugging a leg. “Perhaps, this entity is a snake.” Said the skinny blind man squeezing the trunk. “Every one knows there is only ONE!” screamed the blind child astride. “Don’t holler at you’re elders.” The turbaned tail wiggler shouted. “Everyone I know thinks there’s MANY”. Said the blind woman rubbing toenails. “Unlikely, very unlikely,” they bickered. “It’s a Snake.” “It’s a Tree”. “It’s a rope!” “Maybe we should ask IT.” Said the child, and she laughed till she fell off.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/29/2010 10:45:00 AM
awesome work Debbie gal. mail call : )) xoxoxo
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Date: 7/30/2009 1:15:00 PM
This is a great acrostic! I love the message!... Sabrina
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Date: 7/16/2009 5:29:00 PM
Very nice
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Date: 7/15/2009 7:03:00 PM
Nice write Deborah! But to answer the poetic Queston, is another matter! Love jm You have mail!
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Date: 7/15/2009 10:20:00 AM
Carpe deum...also means...SEIZE GOD ;) Light & Love
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Date: 7/14/2009 1:16:00 AM
Nic one Debbie.Thank you for your welcome bog comments today .Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/13/2009 9:11:00 PM
intriguing write! Deb! nice! Jim
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Date: 7/13/2009 5:36:00 PM
GREAT Acrostic poem.. I love this style... Thank you for sharing.....:JP)
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