Cottony Clouds

Soft cottony clouds Invites investigation On a summer's day

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Faire Lucas

Date: 7/30/2009 11:55:00 AM

very nice haiku and i love how it sounds so innocent as if a child had expressed their feelings on the clouds....very lovely to read and this is one of my favorites of Haiku......Love Faire

James Fraser

Date: 7/28/2009 10:22:00 AM

Looks like Lary did the same as me when i was younger, and i still do it now>>nice Haiku Sara>>James

Lary Houston

Date: 7/28/2009 9:53:00 AM

did you ever lie in the grass as a child and watch the clouds for unique formations...bears, dragons, angels? you must have to express these thoughts. After reading your poems I want to try my hand at haiku. Thanks for the word picture...Lary