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Cotton Candy Girl

She's cotton candy sweet a whole line to buy her as hungry boys waited patiently. But Once they got to the front of the line and handed her their money and took a bite out of her they tasted staleness and there's no receipt. No refunds just move on so the next sucker can pay for their idealistic fantasy. She can transform into god if she wanted to while the guys admire her from a far everything seemed picture perfect. That's the problem no one's perfect sick and tired of immature guys judging only on looks. They get upset after they try it and it's not as good as it seems spitting out the contents they get angry and mean. Let down by the cotton candy girl they try to rap to the milkshake and the Oreo all leaving them resenting that they ever consented to them. Now poor eraser girl walks down the block it's love at first sight because not only is she special there is more to her than her sugar coating. Inside and out she had a heart that only breathed compassion; a brain that gave her reason and wisdom. Her beauty was the last thing on her mind, in fact she needed someone to tell her before she could realize just how wonderful she was. No cotton candy girl in her but the resemblance was remarkable. She gave no tooth aches or staleness. Her heart was available for free and she would always share no matter how small the bundle. The guy was mesmerized as he glared deeply into her eyes. He felt foolish and felt a smirk coming on at his stupidity for ever wanting a cotton candy girl.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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