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Cosmic Karma

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Cosmic Karma

I traverse the oceans within a breeze
I light my way holding burning trees
Freeing my body, my heart, my soul
I talk and walk through miles and roads
I view the future with discernable need
Yet I succumb to my fate with noted heed

Do I lack the courage to go beyond my whole?
Do I feel the need to remain stagnant and tole?

I lack conviction in my sturdy brain
Trying to fight these excuses so lame

Solitary in my endeavours I so create
My weakness I continually berate

In my minds eye I spy this epic infused
In a twilight of colours I discover loosed 

Yet I traverse the oceans within a breeze
And light my way holding burning trees . . .


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  1. Date: 8/17/2009 1:15:00 AM
    Nicely done. Sara

  1. Date: 6/9/2009 9:47:00 AM
    Love those last two lines. Strong introspection here. Don't be too hard on yourself now. We do what we can. Beautiful write. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 6/9/2009 6:08:00 AM
    Dude:So Cosmic-ish :p Love it:)