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Cosmic Juggling

The Earth the Moon entranced by the Sun Moving together in harmony Perfectly placed by the only One I look to the sky and there I see All the stars like jewels in the night sky Moving together in harmony Those who don't believe I wonder Why So much beauty wherever I look All the stars like jewels in the night sky Some things cannot be found in a book I use my eyes to take in God's show So much beauty wherever I look Cosmic juggling sky is a glow A front row seat my pleasure tonight I use my eyes to take in God's show Thankful for this gift I feel delight A front row seat my pleasure tonight The Earth the moon entranced by the sun Perfectly placed by the only One This poem came to be as a result of Timothy Hicks Writing a Juggling comment on one of my poems. So I decided I would turn it into a poem. Thanks Timothy you never know what will result inspiration.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/15/2016 8:07:00 AM
Such a glowing, illuminating poem, Richard. A brilliantly written terzanelle. You are uber talented, but hey you done heard that before, right. Great poem of how we are in awe of God's creations. Love and peace to you.
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Date: 3/30/2013 7:59:00 PM
This is really lovely Richard, great theme, great rhyme, very well written indeed. impressive. Take care, Regards Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/31/2013 6:46:00 AM
Thanks Richard, a nice compliment from my Name Twin. Have a great day.
Date: 3/30/2013 5:23:00 PM
So happy to have inspired someone Richard! I love the celestial theme and how you based it all around the Creator... It's a neat thought to think the planet we live on is a Jugglers ball... And amazingly after all this time we haven't dropped... Sorry it took me awhile to read this... Finally got done adjusting to the UK time difference!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/31/2013 6:47:00 AM
I hope you are having the time of your life Timothy. Thanks for taking time out to view my poems.
Date: 3/29/2013 4:01:00 PM
Tremendous! A spectacular write my friend! I am enthralled by the Creator, and this poem brought Him back into the limelight! You are a master of these Terzanelles Richard! I always love getting inspired, there are many things out there that you can get inspiration from, you just have to look at it in that special way! What a terrific piece, a masterful poem, Great Work!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/29/2013 4:20:00 PM
Thanks Russell I am pleased you enjoyed my poem.
Date: 3/29/2013 12:44:00 PM
- This is gorgeous. (We learn and get ideas from each other, that's what is so nice with P-S.) - Happy Easter, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/29/2013 12:45:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise happy Easter to you as well.
Date: 3/29/2013 11:46:00 AM
I also wonder at the questioning? Beautiful poem...perfect!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/29/2013 12:25:00 PM
Thanks Donna
Date: 3/29/2013 10:49:00 AM
wonderful poem which comes together perfectly in the last stanza,, love your front row,, would have loved to have joined you...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/29/2013 12:30:00 PM
I think his theatre is open every night. I would have enjoyed the company, thanks for commenting.
Date: 3/29/2013 10:17:00 AM
Lovely, Richard. I do love the theme of this and the concept of watching the show by the Master Designer. He is awesome! Good write.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/29/2013 12:31:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, I know you appreciate his handiwork.
Date: 3/29/2013 9:40:00 AM
wow.. this is stunning write.. so amazing.. enjoyed much your brilliant talent dear friend poet Richard..<3 :) Sk
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/29/2013 12:36:00 PM
What a nice way of saying it. Thanks so much

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