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I shall forever remain a night’s celestial pilgrim meandering beneath the skyscape’s towering dome -- And along the cobblestone of luminous runways, jewels of flamed beamers seem to flick beyond earth’s tableau as the grandeur from anonymous stars explode, That I imagine Orion’s groove whirling around a trillion cosmic moons— nameless yet ascertained... for some percieved reason, each nova circles on its own orbital zone pulsing then ebbing through my enigmatic impression ... until I am devoured by each shimmer, each odyssey, each dancelight-- making my quill’s ink curdle again. Pareidolia Poetry Contest Sponsor: Craig Cornish 8/22/2020

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Date: 8/29/2020 6:28:00 PM
amazing pen you have, dear Nette. Congrats in the contest
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Date: 8/28/2020 8:37:00 AM
Stargazer - "celestial pilgrim" - on an "odyssey." So creative and so uniquely expressed. Congratulations Nette on your well deserved win!
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Date: 8/27/2020 6:30:00 PM
Amazing poetry nette, love the journey, and where, your wonderful mind takes one...congratulations,,stay safe, my friend.
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Date: 8/27/2020 5:59:00 PM
Another majestic write Nette, cosmos in your quill...now that's amazing writing, congrats on another deserved win!
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Date: 8/27/2020 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful poem and picture. Love your line, "circles on its own orbital zone." Enjoy your win and day.......................
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Date: 8/23/2020 6:08:00 AM
A poem of astronomical proportion! Thank you for my broadway win.
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Date: 8/22/2020 3:29:00 PM
Beautiful in every way--exquisite imagery of cosmic impressions--a true delight, Nette.
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Date: 8/22/2020 1:57:00 PM
Quite a challenge to keep one's eyes on the stars and one's quill on the paper, but you have done it! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 8/22/2020 1:38:00 PM
Love your interpretation Nette, the wonders of the heavens has inspired you Hope youre on the mend. Tom
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