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"cosmic Dust"

All is now there are no mistakes In God's time there is no time At this the natural mind quakes One of love’s meld can be fixed For all is one and one all Not being of the mind’s nix In liquid of it’s particles, form is reborn Not like in time of natural form Not set in concrete the mind’s forlorn As large as the whole universe God's time is now, liquid particles so fine By microscopic particle disperse The smallest of particles most minute Each particle has memorie, a cosmic point Love’s particles are no fluke Each particle knows just how to fit Each particle is God, faith's mystery By the cosmic mind there is no glitz 2-14-10 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/19/2010 2:52:00 AM

Moses, reading your poetry this morning has been a wonderful way to start the day. Thank you for sharing your words. And thank you for your most welcome recent comments on my poetry. Have a super Day! Agape, Dane Ann

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/27/2010 11:58:00 AM

Ever faithful, are you dear friend, and sharing this gift to all. A wonderful poem here! ....ps...a big thank you for placing my poem among all the wonderful entries in the Paranormal contest! Thank you for the challenging task....a fun contest, indeed!! Love, Carrie

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 2/25/2010 8:26:00 AM

"Each particle has God's cosmic mind..." how true you write and how divine :)) xo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/23/2010 7:11:00 PM

Hi Moses.. I just posted a new blog tonight on poetry.. would u please kindly comment on it so we can build interest in the different forms poets use.. thankxxx my friend..help is here anytime u need it...luv.. "Sweetheart" ..appreciate your comments on Liquidity... how about Dynamic Duo for John Heck's contest...???

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/23/2010 5:30:00 AM

SOUP MAIL ... luv..

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/23/2010 4:32:00 AM

For all is One and One is all..Amen dear friend-Charma

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/22/2010 5:09:00 PM

In time space and eternity, there is no getting around it....God is existence and all. Nice poem, John. Thanks for your welcome comments

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2010 12:36:00 PM

HI, John, you are a very COSMIC kind of guy. ARe you an Aquarius or something? Anyway, your cosmic poems here bring to my mind the infinity of God's power and love and how we are as grains of sand. That kinda thing is what comes to me reading your great rhyme here. LUv, andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/18/2010 11:51:00 AM

John did you mean you want to enter ? You must use Ballad or Common meter form & there's 6 already so just enter something now and you can change it later! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/17/2010 5:02:00 PM

Amen! I hear and believe too! I wrote a Prayer ;) perhaps you'll like it? Light & Love

John Beam

Date: 2/17/2010 2:18:00 PM

thanks for comment very good ryme just in time ditto with love in Christ Jesus

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/17/2010 12:20:00 PM

enjoyed reading today, thanks for your comments also, they are an uplifting to my soul.

Mary Ann Young

Date: 2/17/2010 8:32:00 AM

liked it very much keep writing. =)

Carole Cookie Arnold

Date: 2/16/2010 1:29:00 PM

Every partical of matter, vibration of sound, drop of rain or smile on anothers face when called together in His name become our whole Embodiment and our glowing reflection of Him. Love Cookie

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 2/16/2010 10:46:00 AM

A beautiful & thought provoking Poem my friend. Seeing God in everything leads to feel God within. I hope every religion feels the same here but how beautiful. Thanks and Many thanks for your precious comments on my poems. Best wishes and love Ravindra ...4..John Freeman

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2010 4:21:00 AM

The last stanza is especially appealing. Unless satan comes in and destroyes what God had intended but someday. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. On the bird, I did find out that they are Northern Flickers and they are a kind of Woodpecker and eat from the ground the only Woodpecker that does that. I don't know the difference in a Woodpecker and a peckerwood but I think the last is slang that's derogatory but not sure. Sara

June Ellen Smith

Date: 2/16/2010 1:07:00 AM

Really enjoyed your poem. Thanks for your comment on mine. When is the contest? Love and God bless, Ellen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/15/2010 7:40:00 PM

thankxxx Moses for your special and inspiring comments on my poetry especially In God's Time which inspired Cosmic Dust.... makes me feel wonderful knowing something I wrote inspired another poet to write something so beautiful and precious.. and all God's children said...AMEN...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/14/2010 2:40:00 PM

I love the way you love God..You are salt at our site..Salt..is golden..Beautiful poem dear friend..Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/14/2010 12:53:00 PM

Indeed, "Love's particles are no fluke," Moses. This is all part of the universal plan, God's love generates many forms. A deep and provocative write, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2010 11:40:00 AM

PERFECTION! .. thankxxx for this elegant poetry today on the special day for LUV... immense message and luv your title too.. thankxxx for the idea.. will do .. SOUP MAIL ... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 2/14/2010 10:34:00 AM

very interesting way of putting it! great poem!