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Corridors of Fire and Gold

Oh what of these glorious feet will you fly? Inhaling all your colors so brilliant they daze my eyes Bushes of fire put a spell on your mind If you gaze at them long enough you will find The hand of the Lord came down and dusted the soil Brushed to a golden earthly lemon foil He turned raw scenery into a pastel picture Where it hangs in its beauty as a relished fixture What an illustrious way to reach your end Go down with all the colors you send How shortly forgotten your splendor will be Blowing in the wind and sadly set free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/24/2008 9:49:00 PM
He turned raw scenery into a pastel picture Where it hangs in its beauty as a relished fixture and how gorgeous is this whole poem and the lovlies here above!!
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Date: 10/24/2008 4:44:00 AM
Hey there! Just stopping by to say, I totally missed the theme of your last contest and I feel like such a dope! lol I did not realize it needed to be about writing, I thought it could be about anything that inspired us! lol love me
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Date: 10/22/2008 3:56:00 AM
I will surly miss autumn when it is gone, but then - the glory of snow!!! Love it all! Love Kristin
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Date: 10/20/2008 4:08:00 PM
Beautiful write Laura, and I love the idea of inhaling colours. Echoing Sharon's words below, a huge thank you for the contest that you sponsored and I am deeply honoured to have received a placing. It's all thanks to Sharon that I found out about your contest and submitted my entry! Love, Nigel
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Date: 10/20/2008 1:13:00 PM
Laura, how fleeting is this breathtaking season? Nature truly is miraculous. You have painted a most beautiful and (sadly) transient picture of autumn in motion. Excellent! Laura, just noticed your contest winners on the side here. Thank you so much for the efforts of sponsoring and for the huge honor of placing! Love, Shar xoxo
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