Coronation Day-Hs

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rainbow of flowers multitude of flags flutter the sepals-accept v-formation geese the royal air force power crown jewels fly high crows in ebony great britain’s bobbies whistle corralling the crowds reign of umbrellas tutelary governing until kingdom come inherited solemn pledge the sovereign’s soul on the ledge

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2023 3:17:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Haiku/Sonnet contest, Kim - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2023 5:06:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/13/2023 1:44:00 AM

Great one, Kim, though it was not entirely about nature:) pen on:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2023 5:06:00 AM

I read the contest description as having to be connected by same theme. Sorry if I misunderstood.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/8/2023 5:38:00 AM

It was special to watch the ceremonies--your poem joins the celebration, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2023 6:15:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/7/2023 5:54:00 PM

Well-told, Embedded Reporter!!... Charles is certainly perching himself on 'the ledge' with all his mumble-jumble apologizing for his ancestors' mistakes --- a big mistake on his part, as he's about to find out!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2023 8:23:00 PM

Thank you! The world watches the mumble-jumble.