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Core of My Universe

Feel my heart in your chest It's beating, it's alive It's saying " I love you" Dry my tears with your lips You'll taste my happiness Luckily, we are true blue Be my harbour, and my home My idol and my oath Be the best words in my head See the oceans in my eyes Touch the heaven in my arms You are the core of my universe I draw a constellation with your moles Without you, my heart's a black hole Without you, I'm an empty space We were created from star dust My mom is Venus,she said that love is the core of our universe Be my knowledge and my force My answer and my source Be the best thing in my life See the forests in my eyes Touch the deserts in my arms You are the core of my universe I don't need to speak I don't need to see I know you can feel it in your heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/21/2018 5:17:00 AM
Heard the song, love it..
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Date: 6/10/2018 2:39:00 AM
My friend (Vlada Pekh) and I wrote a song using this poem: https://soundcloud.com/rona-kranker/core-of-my-universe
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Date: 5/7/2018 12:07:00 PM
Hello Alisa, it s a really deep and lovely poem, really enjoyable one to read good luck
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Alisa Balaieva
Date: 6/10/2018 2:40:00 AM
Thanks, Faraz!))) All the love to you xx
Date: 4/14/2018 1:50:00 PM
A very deep and wonderful poem with such beautiful imagery and thought. A perfect poem you gave us Alisa.
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Alisa Balaieva
Date: 5/6/2018 10:51:00 AM
Thanks for lovely words. I'll take part in that competition. I'll introduce this poem as lyrics))
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James Swartz
Date: 4/14/2018 4:01:00 PM
I do think if you entered it in the right contest you would have a great chance at winning it. You should check to see if there are any contests for this piece right now.
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Alisa Balaieva
Date: 4/14/2018 3:58:00 PM
Hi James) Your words as usual are so nice and kind. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. How do you think do I have any chance to attract judge's attention in one competition with that poem? Anyway, have a lovely day xx
Date: 4/10/2018 2:17:00 PM
Hello Alisa, you have written a beautiful poem. I have enjoyed reading. have a nice day my friend.
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Alisa Balaieva
Date: 4/14/2018 3:59:00 PM
Good evening dear Darlene, It's a great honour for me to read such amazing words from you. It's a real big deal!)) All the best xx
Date: 4/8/2018 1:02:00 PM
A heartfelt poem. "Touch the deserts in my arms" is very nice.
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Alisa Balaieva
Date: 4/9/2018 4:15:00 AM
Thanks Richard. Have a lovely day))
Date: 4/3/2018 1:23:00 PM
Yes I really like it..
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Date: 4/3/2018 9:38:00 AM
I hope you both can feel it together.. Beautiful poem Alisa..
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Alisa Balaieva
Date: 4/3/2018 1:18:00 PM
Do you really like it? I'm glad and I feel honoured)) Thanks for kind words. All the love from Ukraine xx

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