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What softness in silence amidst the cacophony of a spin cycle world war. Lying next to your glow in sleep's stillness, careful of your bandaged hand. Watching your breath enter and leave, the rise and fall of such loveliness., reminded of our miracle wings as they unfolded in the evening heat. Was it only yesterday..,I walked the River road to find the station on Market street. Only to trip on newsprint from the war drive, that smile so alive, when I tried to doff my cap. I can still smell the Mercurochrome, as I winced at my torn khaki covered knee.., washed and mended by such tender .30 caliber case casting hands. Sleek Stearman mistress soars, airborne rudder and ailerons trimmed and steady.. in mind-bending dizzying free fall and effortless flight., though may just try to kill an unwary cadet, who fell deep in Cora's eyes... I don't know how to leave your side, much less find the words to say good-bye. And when the war is over, I'll call on you proper... when the skies are cleared of Jerry's buzzing crates. My squadron mates call and beckon me..to climb aboard the train., for there's a war to fight and win. When I return we'll take Fee Fee Church road to the Delmar loop trolley, and stroll the path along Creve Coeur Lake under the Summer sun. Singing hearts will soar while Sons in Service flags flutter in distant windows, and must remember that painted pot of peonies for your mother's grave. Patched khaki trousers sway softly now.., next to Lady Pepperell floral sheets, and blue cotton bib overalls, worn on second shift at the Ordnance Plant. I wondered if you caught my glance.., the blue corselette and matching bra.. in Summer's sighing clothesline, unashamed among the stars. And when the war is over, I'll call on you proper.. when the skies are cleared of Jerry's buzzing crates. But the squadron calls and beckons me.., climb aboard the train.., for there's a war to fight and win. We'll jump and jive to the jitterbug and boogie woogie to the Bugle Boy of Company B.. Glen Miller will bring the big band Serenade, while Count Basie keeps rhythm and time. Will you try on my cap, or better still my wedding ring? And don't you know I'll call on you proper Cora.. when the skies are cleared of Jerry's buzzing crates. To the city by the river, and your silken clothesline.. I'll take your mended hand, like you took a flyboy's heart.
World War II - A love story

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Date: 4/6/2020 6:42:00 PM
Through in Tommy Dorsey and Count Basie and Les Paul and Mary Ford and Gene Vincent just for kicks. Oh and Frankie Lyman and the Teenagers, Fats Domino and Everly Brothers.
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Date: 5/29/2021 10:51:00 AM
That's one for the money, two for the show, three to make ready and four to go. go, go.. -Frankie Lyman and the Teenagers
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Date: 4/17/2020 11:23:00 PM
Listening to that magical voice tonight (Frankie Lymon & the Teenagers). https://youtu.be/Rcq9ff5fGTk
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Date: 4/6/2020 10:48:00 PM
Jim, That was special music for a special era for sure. Jimmy Dorsey, Duke Ellington, Benny Goodman, Glen Miller, and my mother's favorite..Jo Stafford. A special prayer for Bob Hope too. Thanks for the memories Jim. I know you're probably missing your Sunday services these days. -Richard
Date: 4/6/2020 6:36:00 PM
I remember Corrina, Corrina.
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Date: 4/6/2020 10:40:00 PM
Hi Jim, Thanks for the interesting comment. My buddy once told me Corrina, Corrina was one of the few songs Bob Dylan sang that wasn't his own. -Richard
Date: 3/13/2020 10:07:00 AM
jitter bug, boogie woogie, Glen Miller. Oh, my you do bring me back to my growing up days. "Mercurochrome" - that REALLY stings!
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Date: 3/15/2020 2:04:00 AM
Yes, mothers knew this too. But it heals..there is no doubt about that. -R
Date: 3/6/2020 9:41:00 AM
This is wonderfully penned! A FAVE of mine!
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Date: 3/7/2020 9:26:00 PM
Valerie, Thank you for the comment & Fave dear poet with the sunshine name. -Richard
Date: 3/4/2020 2:06:00 AM
oh I've just listened to the link I was expecting to hear your voice ... but I love the music, it is perfect to go with the poem!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/9/2020 11:32:00 PM
Jan, Thanks for that comment. My Mom loved Jo Stafford. Let's share it's memory. -Richard
Date: 2/24/2020 12:24:00 AM
Very well written! Full of vivid details and emotion. A fav for me.
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Date: 2/29/2020 9:34:00 PM
Juliet, Thank you for that comment. What part did you like? What part did you dislike? -Richard
Date: 2/19/2020 7:18:00 PM
what a touching story Richard, you brought the scene to life before my eyes:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/4/2020 2:03:00 AM
I find writing romantic poems very difficult!:-) I love reading the work of others though:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2020 9:54:00 PM
Jan, Thanks for reading this love story. Never too many love stories to tell. -Richard
Date: 2/17/2020 12:04:00 PM
What a lovely touching story, Richard. You take us back effortlessly in time...when love, war, wishes and dreams took a rollercoaster ride. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/19/2020 9:47:00 PM
Paul, What a rollercoaster ride it was. Some teachers can teach history. A rare few can break through to the essence of a moment in time. I had such a teacher. -Richard
Date: 2/17/2020 7:29:00 AM
WOW! A special story you wrote--exquisite details adorn your verses--so well done, Richard!
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Date: 2/19/2020 9:34:00 PM
Vijay, Good evening to you. Thanks for that comment. -Richard
Date: 2/17/2020 1:07:00 AM
Wonderful story, wonderful poetry love being taken there, sad times, but had to be, or enslaved..love the 40's song..Harry
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Date: 2/19/2020 9:33:00 PM
Harry, Thank you for the comment. I thought of using a Glen Miller hit. But Ella just seemed to fit. -Richard
Date: 2/16/2020 11:01:00 AM
Just lovely and full of heart beat!
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Date: 2/16/2020 8:15:00 PM
Krish, Thank you for that comment. All good things between heaven and Earth share a hand and heart beat. And your hands have been so busy, let the violins play on. -Richard
Date: 2/15/2020 9:42:00 PM
Takes us all back a way ---- a way back. Seems like those times were so much more genuine, but memories do tend to wear rose-colored glasses. Still... Thanks for a real treat, Richard. Kudos! :) Gershon
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Date: 2/16/2020 10:42:00 AM
Gershon, I'm glad that you commented on this poem. But it is important for me to tell you. The name I wanted to use,.a name I've always loved..Elizabeth. -Richard
Date: 2/15/2020 7:35:00 AM
Wow Richard. This is so special. The descriptions written throughout, bring me right to it. I can feel it all too as I read this. A Fav :)
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Date: 4/16/2020 9:52:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. The best love stories last so long, like the horizon, a place we'll never reach. -Richard
Date: 2/14/2020 8:19:00 PM
Wow. The song helps me feel like I’m there! Your knowledge of history mixed with this amazing gift is out of this world unreal. “I’ll still remember you when you’ve forgotten me.”
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Date: 2/14/2020 9:19:00 PM
Thanks for the comment Tara. And Happy Valentine's day to you Niece. When I get older losing my hair many years from now..will you still be sending me a valentine, Birthday greetings, bottle of wine? If I'd been out till quarter to three would you lock the door? Will you still need me, will you still feed me When I'm sixty four? -The Beatles
Date: 2/14/2020 4:30:00 AM
Your wonderful narrative was so filled imagery and colors of the time. It is brilliant and a Fave. I hope this is at the top. You need to date it for the contest. Have a love filled Valentine's Day Richard. xxoo
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Date: 2/14/2020 3:41:00 PM
Connie, Thank you for the comment. And thank you for the Fav. Then: Great Depression and war. Now: Great depression and war. This time a different depression, this time, war with a microscopic enemy. Time to test a new greatest generation(?) Happy Valentine's day wishes to you too. -Richard
Date: 2/10/2020 10:47:00 AM
War is hateful! It leaves scars, it separates true love, and causes misery and distress. Your write took me back to many photos that my Dad had saved of World War ll. It also made me think of my parents romance, but they were lucky enough to meet at the end of the war, when the British troops marched through Greece and freed the Greeks from German occupation. A great write from beginning to end Richard - nostalgic - I felt I could see my Dad! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/14/2020 2:47:00 PM
Jennifer, Thank you for your comment and patience. I wasn't aware of Germany's role in Greece during the war. Neither was a friend from work, when asked. You just inspired me to look into this more. Happy Valentine's day. -Richard
Date: 2/9/2020 7:50:00 PM
Richard, I love the nostalgic read back in time. The imagery and metaphor, tender .30 caliber hands, unashamed among the stars. Great write
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Date: 2/14/2020 2:05:00 PM
Eve, Thank you for mentioning this, Cora's hands, one presumably injured. An injury that kept her home from work perhaps. But laundry never waits., and fate stepped in. Or at least tripped in. There were a lot of busy hands during the war. Happy Valentine's day. -Richard
Date: 2/9/2020 12:34:00 PM
wow, best ever, my friend. The part about the corsellete on the clothes line was amazing and how you related everything so nostalgically to that period of time. FAVE
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Date: 2/14/2020 1:56:00 PM
Andrea, Thank you for this comment. I researched this clothesline from a time period from around the Summer of '43. How cliche is that? You can learn a lot about somebody by their laundry. And, just maybe, fall in love with them without even knowing why. Happy Valentine's day. -Richard
Date: 2/9/2020 7:38:00 AM
You set the scene very well.. we still love to boogie woogie today aswell... A nostalgic love story ..
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Date: 2/14/2020 1:48:00 PM
Silent One, Thank you for stopping by to read this long poem. I never stopped dancing..,even when the music stopped. Happy Valentine's day. -Richard
Date: 2/9/2020 2:38:00 AM
Richard..A FAV in my book and hope a POTD...I share Sandra's feelings. The Repetition of those moving lines " I'll call on you proper" An amazing story in splendiferous verses! Panagiota xx
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Date: 2/14/2020 1:45:00 PM
Panagiota, Thank you for the comment. Thank you for the Fav. This poem is fanciful fiction, made up in my head. But I would like to think that somewhere out there a cadet found a new love, and she a true heart, both to call their own. Happy Valentine's day. -Richard
Date: 2/8/2020 10:53:00 PM
what a beautiful story told in such detail I felt as I was there watching it play out before me...war separated so many young couples one could only hope each soldier returned home to the same love he left... enjoyed this one Richard...good penning :)
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Date: 2/14/2020 1:37:00 PM
Sandra, Thank you for that comment. There are stories that dwell on the lives touched by war that forever found a different path. A path to love. Happy Valentine's day. -Richard

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