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Out on the porch at a different time of day..I just felt led to go out for awhile..It was such a peaceful time of day..Sara
The roosters are silent The crow is asleep Mocking Bird is somber The Buzzards are grieved The Sparrows are at rest Babies hatching in their nest? Now the Dove starts cooing Then silent once again It is the cool of the evening When all seek some rest The cool of the evening When God wants to commune Be quiet_listen_Selah! He' ll talk to you...... Calling it Free Verse

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Date: 4/28/2012 4:01:00 PM
What a gentle observation... we have all been there, when sunset and moonrise are bookends to evening's softness and quiet. Well done, Sara! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/27/2012 5:39:00 PM
Oh I do love this one Sara ;} makes me feel like I'm right there,, I grew up in the country growing our own food,, chickens & eggs too. ,,,,, oh and thank you for reading my "Hold Tight" ;} have a blessed day
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Date: 4/27/2012 2:39:00 PM
love this one - i can imagine that silence. those hens next door are only ever quiet when they're in their little house for the night, lol.
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