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Cool Waters

Deep is the water of the lagoon filled with many kinds of things the more you look the more you see reflected clouds floating in the water A host of wondrous plants on the banks little fish darting hither and tither tall reeds are casting mottled shadows deep down a big catfish lies in ambush The cool waters a pure bliss to watch rippling waves setting off flashes different colours glint and shatter like light beams hitting coloured shards The tranquillity of this magical place calls out to me beckoning me closer I lay on the grassy bank trailing a hand in the soft water and feel I am restored Keep this place secret just for us to share come here whenever the outside world is too much here a blissful peace awaits to bathe you to bring comfort and soothe away the daily pains

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/4/2013 3:05:00 PM
Love it,,,, cool waters is also the name of a perfume by JORDACHE ;} happy fourth of July ;}
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/4/2013 6:51:00 PM
hi Debbie yes it is a perfume happy 4th to you ty for your time reading Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/28/2013 12:16:00 AM
oh the oasis of poetry, really beautiful is this.
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Date: 6/28/2013 5:52:00 AM
Ty Harry glad it touched you Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/25/2013 11:55:00 PM
I felt I saw it in High definition.....lovely...:):):):)Adarsh
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Date: 6/26/2013 7:46:00 AM
hi Adarsh ty lovely comment Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/25/2013 6:43:00 PM
Shadow it sounds like a very tranquil place. Nature healing the mind, body and soul. I can really feel the Zen like stated it would bring. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/26/2013 7:45:00 AM
hi Connie it does ty for your lovely comments Shadow x smiles

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