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Cool Spring

Cool spring stirring in silence beneath winter’s breath, its eternal magic potion which awakens strength, life, love, hope and second chances It is a gift that is freely given- renewed life and redemption for all that breathe. ~*~

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Date: 4/20/2013 7:12:00 PM
like this vary much ,full of light
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Date: 2/28/2013 7:59:00 PM
I've tried one of these writes before. What one usually fabricates is a pyramid-like poem. Yours is well written.
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Date: 2/28/2013 3:51:00 PM
lovely write on this unusual form - I think I've only tried the form once
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Date: 2/26/2013 5:23:00 PM
this one is very beautiful, dear. I enjoyed your cool spring!
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Date: 2/25/2013 10:44:00 PM
Very nicely done.
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Date: 2/25/2013 1:43:00 PM
wonderrful and very creative,,
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Date: 2/24/2013 6:26:00 AM
Top shelf Poetic form my dear sweet caring friend.. hugs Michael
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Date: 2/23/2013 7:25:00 PM
Very breathtaking.......
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Date: 2/23/2013 6:24:00 PM
Powerful work..Enjoyed reading this one today..The date on the comment was 2/21/2013..Sara
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