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Cool Rain

a choir of drops a symphony of breeze prelude to autumn leaves scattered humidity shattered a crisp feeling across my face and the promise of more scarves heavier jackets pumpkins, butternut squash, and apples a wish on a leaf and watch it float away until it drop on another spot on the ground and the sun hiding somewhere on its rotation route behind clouds of gray and white on a cool night many lights out television sounds and a hot cup of something fragrant and wholesome to draw the autumn around the corner closer adorned in brown, tan, orange, yellow and red nourished by pumpkins butternut squash and an abundance of apples

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Date: 8/26/2019 6:17:00 PM
Love the imagery in this one, Tameko. Those first two lines -- 'a choir of drops // a symphony of breeze' -- so pregnant with promise. A belated welcome to Poetry Soup, and keep writing!! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 8/25/2019 9:10:00 AM
Beautiful, the flow of this elegant and the visual heart warming. Sheer Terror
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Tameko Barnette
Date: 8/26/2019 4:41:00 PM
Hey thanks for the compliments.

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