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Cool Passion

{He} Moisture wells from in to out The sky drapes its dress Quiescently, you tilt your head and pout Your shoulder kisses a tiny tress Vapor is breathed on the glass A tantalizing blaze flaring from behind Fumbling your hair into a clump of morass Skintight, our souls entwined As we sublime seconds quicker than a blink your heart throbs, I flutter and let out a soft whine in sync I remember you like the taste of butter {She} An icy hot bath melts our raw hearts transpire roses are planted all over your svelte body as my undying desire Gases gushes out from my pore as we boil ourselves a temperature too high my teeth still sizzle and I am ready to roar hereby you lean in and charge my oversupply Maybe I need a cup of water to dilute the enkindled fire, or else a lamb to the slaughter could be me stuck with a liar

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Date: 1/31/2016 12:21:00 AM
Helen, you are so kind, thank you for the nice reply to my comment. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. XoX LINDA
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Date: 2/24/2016 11:00:00 PM
Helen, if you start posting again, I will support your poems.... hugs
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Helen Cheng
Date: 2/24/2016 10:54:00 PM
Thank you Linda!! I wish we could support each other in the long run:D
Date: 1/29/2016 4:52:00 PM
Hi Helen...I am very much impressed by your poem dealing with hot & cold passion; most of all enjoyed the final stanza. ~ Regards // paul
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Helen Cheng
Date: 1/29/2016 6:45:00 PM
thank you paul!!! i'm so happy you enjoy reading my poem:) i'll keep it up!!
Date: 12/10/2015 4:38:00 PM
Hi Helen, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Helen Cheng
Date: 1/29/2016 6:46:00 PM
Thank you Linda<3 I'll continue to work on my poems!
Date: 12/7/2015 9:56:00 AM
Hi Helen, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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Helen Cheng
Date: 12/9/2015 6:08:00 PM
Sure, you tooo^^ waiting for Christmas to come
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/9/2015 9:34:00 AM
Sounds great to me!! Have a wonderful day!
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Helen Cheng
Date: 12/8/2015 11:02:00 PM
Hello Pandita, thank you so much for your encouragement! I would continue to work on my poetry skills. Please stay tuned and I hope we could have insightful conversations too:)

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