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Cool Breeze

.                     Nomadic whispers 
                            North winds speak to the great plains
                                            Warnings of winter

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  1. Date: 9/26/2009 5:28:00 AM
    Excellent! Imagery says it all!

  1. Date: 9/23/2009 2:52:00 PM
    A Historical Haiku... About Everywhere How Cool Is That? Very! MoonBee

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 6:28:00 PM
    great haiku! Abe!...and thanks for your support!...jim

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 5:10:00 PM
    Soup mail..

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 4:58:00 PM
    cool breeze..warnings of winter..excellent haiku,one of your best--Charma:)

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 10:40:00 PM
    Another masterpiece, this one goes to my favs! I like the alliteration; and the first line is superb! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 12:21:00 PM
    excellent, I can feel that nomadic wind down my back (shivering). I am holding onto every last shred of warmth I can

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 11:57:00 AM
    This one is still my favorite, those winds whispered to me yesterday evening...nice work on this one.

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 10:15:00 AM
    Ace Haiku Abe, delightful read>>James

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 6:16:00 AM
    Beautiful write. I lived in the mid-west and the southwest years long past. And this haiku whispers the reality of the plains. Beautifully simple. (Thanks for your comments today. Lovingly, Dane

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 11:50:00 PM
    Very atmospheric write Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 12:48:00 PM
    One for my favorites, nice work on this one. It' amazed me when I read it...Raul

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 12:48:00 PM
    Awesome write, Abe! "Nomadic whispers" conjures up quite an image. Oh, how I'd love to hear those "North winds" again! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 11:56:00 AM
    Okay Abe but........please let us have fun with fall before the icy cold winter. Outstanding Haiku by the way. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 10:52:00 AM
    Lovely Haiku. Keep writing. Sara