Cool Breeze

. Nomadic whispers North winds speak to the great plains Warnings of winter

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Audrey Haick

Date: 9/26/2009 5:28:00 AM

Excellent! Imagery says it all!

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/23/2009 2:52:00 PM

A Historical Haiku... About Everywhere How Cool Is That? Very! MoonBee

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/18/2009 6:28:00 PM

great haiku! Abe!...and thanks for your support!...jim

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/18/2009 5:10:00 PM

Soup mail..

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/18/2009 4:58:00 PM

cool breeze..warnings of winter..excellent haiku,one of your best--Charma:)

Veronica Joseph

Date: 9/17/2009 12:21:00 PM

excellent, I can feel that nomadic wind down my back (shivering). I am holding onto every last shred of warmth I can

Date: 9/17/2009 12:12:00 PM

I really like the opening line. Good use of imagery and alliteration for a creative view. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!! Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/17/2009 11:57:00 AM

This one is still my favorite, those winds whispered to me yesterday evening...nice work on this one.

James Fraser

Date: 9/17/2009 10:15:00 AM

Ace Haiku Abe, delightful read>>James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/17/2009 6:16:00 AM

Beautiful write. I lived in the mid-west and the southwest years long past. And this haiku whispers the reality of the plains. Beautifully simple. (Thanks for your comments today. Lovingly, Dane

Brian Strand

Date: 9/16/2009 11:50:00 PM

Very atmospheric write Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/16/2009 12:48:00 PM

One for my favorites, nice work on this one. It' amazed me when I read it...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2009 12:48:00 PM

Awesome write, Abe! "Nomadic whispers" conjures up quite an image. Oh, how I'd love to hear those "North winds" again! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/16/2009 11:56:00 AM

Okay Abe but........please let us have fun with fall before the icy cold winter. Outstanding Haiku by the way. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/16/2009 10:52:00 AM

Lovely Haiku. Keep writing. Sara