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Cool Blue Destiny

COOL BLUE DESTINY a cool blue crystal daybreak as moon departs shimmering stars on the sea in silhouette they stand alone warm from inside out they swig down brandy seagulls cry their morning pleas gather swiftly orbiting boat drifting free fishing rods wait hooked with bait as glistening scales glide by decoys plea oceans bounty captured as frantic wide eyed last breaths meet destiny © Kim van Breda—May 2014

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Date: 5/29/2014 10:35:00 AM
Where the fisherman claimed by the sea???
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 5/29/2014 12:01:00 PM
Another stanza for justification?? OK, will work on that :)

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