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Conversation (Quadruple Tanka)

CONNVERSATION (quadruple Tanka) Young: “what do old men do?” Old: “are ya tryin’ ta be cute?” Young: “no cute is for kids” Old: “you plannin’ ta write a book?” Young: “some day I too will be old and I need to know i’m not trying to be cute not writing a book tell me what do old men do?” Old: “well friend this will take some thought let’s start with monday” Young: “great! the first day of the week Old: “just wait i’m thinkin’ ……… Young: “don’t bother with step-by-step just be general old man” Old: wait! now let me see……. Young: “why not start with breakfast” Old: “oh! I’m way past that” Young: “okay why not fill me in” Old: “too late i’m ready for bed”

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Date: 5/20/2010 7:03:00 AM
You are cute ;)
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Date: 5/20/2010 6:06:00 AM
That was cute :)
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Date: 5/19/2010 8:01:00 PM
YOu are getting silly with this one. But it's so good to see you POSTING . This was cute. Now let me go see the last recent one!
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Date: 5/19/2010 5:45:00 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Daver. Always a pleasure to read. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 8:37:00 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Since you already have a book, you are way ahead of me. Enjoyed this one. Karen
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Date: 5/18/2010 4:21:00 PM
Great thinking on the old gentleman's part for he was way ahead of him...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/18/2010 3:58:00 PM
This is SOOO funny, Daver. Young people can seem impatient. You captured their youthful spirit well in this witty tanka. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2010 3:44:00 PM
What the young and old learn from each other. Wisdom and Unrigidity together. Thoughtful. Susan
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