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OPEN VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols relies upon 'the one breath limitation' this intuitive cadence pemits the 'reader' (reciter) to respond in an interpretative - interplay unique to the ' happening moment'

CONVENTIONS the banal thoughts as excess baggage widely spaced & reinforced by curious virtues a source of the irregular antecedent in surprising resurrection of the inapproprate derived from pleasured reverberations of prolific understanding mirrored in the soul

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/9/2023 2:14:00 PM

a unique but captivating write, Brian. I like how you described 'banal thoughts' reinforced by curious virtues. A lot of insight is hidden within your words. Nicely done, Sara bnn