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Control

Control! Why I say! It does not make great Control! It tends to go to peoples head sometimes It is really a state of mind Control! Can be evil ,can be good If we use it in the right way Like we should Control! Will make you run of and leave your self Thinking I do not need no help Control! Will cause you to loose the one closes to you heart Because all you like to do is tear them apart Control! Is a something else you see It can take over you, or take over me!!!

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Date: 1/18/2020 2:28:00 PM
You left control as an open verb as in open to either good or bad. You painted more reasons on the bad side of control than on the good side of control. That said nice job in thinking the concept through.
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