Control

Breathe - - you say craving to capture the air inside my being- to the point of no return (holding me hostage) to my needs, this ache inside stimulating the senses, crumbling all of my defenses Stay - - you say as breathing becomes rapid, as the yearning within, begins to burn - does this signify it is the right moment, (to give in to you) to my desires? If so, then take my breath away, breathe me in, deeply and more Before I am completely breathless I softly say - - You are in Control _____________ ~ Just a little Scribble ~

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Running Wolves

Date: 1/2/2020 3:08:00 PM

Oh my God, is it getting warm in (opens window) someone call the fire dept, I think the rooms on fire....wow....

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/2/2020 4:03:00 PM

Yes, this is a steamy poem. Playful, passionate, romantic and sensual. Your thoughts make me smile and blush at the same time. :) Thank you. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/12/2019 12:08:00 PM

A wonderful poem - very sensual, and breathtakingly terrific! beautifully penned Brandy. Hugs, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/12/2019 7:03:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer. Such a wonderful comment. Your thoughts are always appreciated. Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2019 7:01:00 PM

Giving control to another..sharing the beauty that is yourself...calm, cool and completely breathless...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/10/2019 11:17:00 PM

Your thoughts are so beautiful. Thank you Kim. Such a wonderful comment. I appreciate your kindness. :) Brandy

Silent One

Date: 5/5/2019 6:38:00 AM

I'm missing your precious pen... I hope all is well with you..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/5/2019 7:09:00 PM

All is well in my world. Life has been keeping me busy lately. Thank you Silent One. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 5/4/2019 11:47:00 PM

My a very good verse :-). Now I need to cool off :-)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/5/2019 6:56:00 PM

:) Thank you Eve. I hope you were able to cool off, after reading this little scribble of mine. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/4/2019 1:21:00 AM

A Sensuous write - almost like a scene out of 50 shades of grey but you made the poem 50 shades of Brandy Nicole's talented poem - I love this write. An absolute fave for me! Hugs, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/4/2019 7:01:00 PM

Oh my!!! I had no idea this could be viewed in this way. Your thoughts make me smile and blush. :) Thank you Jennifer for your wonderful comment and for placing this in your favorites. My best to you! ~ Brandy

Maria Williams

Date: 5/2/2019 1:16:00 AM

Wow, if only I could scribble like this. Bravo Brandy :)....Maria Hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/2/2019 11:26:00 AM

Thank you Maria. Such a wonderful comment. :) You can scribble in this way. You are very talented with your pen. ~ Brandy

Silent One

Date: 4/29/2019 1:58:00 PM

sensual and beautiful.... your scribbles make the heart soften...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/29/2019 7:32:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 4/29/2019 6:49:00 AM

Desires breathe life into passion...Wonderful write Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/29/2019 7:31:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. Moments truly are breathtaking. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 4/29/2019 5:32:00 AM

You always seem to take our breath away Brandy. Your writes are so beautiful, they do it to us almost every time. Hoping you are doing well. Charlie :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/29/2019 7:29:00 PM

Awe, thank you Charlie. Such a wonderful thing to say. My thoughts are always from the heart. All is well here in my world. My best to you. :) Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/28/2019 6:36:00 AM

Well... I can get you some oxygen, perhaps a resuscitator lol...I love the way you breathe and write, Brandy...happy breathing...^WW^...{*J*}

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/28/2019 7:16:00 PM

Perhaps I am needing more oxygen. :) Thank you my Warrior with Wings. I am breathing better now. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/25/2019 1:54:00 AM

Breathless Brandy, This is beautiful...thank you Panagiota

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/25/2019 11:42:00 AM

Thank you Panagiota. Such a wonderful comment. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 4/24/2019 10:07:00 AM

Good morning ma'am, hope all is well in your world. I apologize for my absence in commenting on your works. It looks like I have missed several wonderful pieces. This one is a beauty. I don't know if there is a better feeling than when one is left breathless by the touch of want and passion and flames...TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/24/2019 11:00:00 AM

Hi Tobey, I am doing good and all is well here in my world. It's okay, no need to apologize. Life keeps us busy, and I understand that. You are right, it is a wonderful feeling indeed, being left breathless- almost speechless. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 4/23/2019 11:31:00 AM

The ache for love can be strong when the one you love is near, perhaps stimulated by a tender touch, a soft caress. At what point do you say yes to your desires? A very romantic and sensual scribble my dear friend. Emotions spoken from your heart. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/23/2019 12:58:00 PM

Even though the being tingles in delight, that ache to give in, the heart knows when the time is right. When to say yes. :) Thank you John. I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/23/2019 7:27:00 AM

A lovely romantic depiction, Brandy..a dance of desires leading to ultimate surrender. I am keeping this scribble in my FAVE.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/23/2019 11:15:00 AM

Yielding to that hunger, the longing hibernating deep inside- the irresistible sensation of love. Yes, to sweetly surrender indeed! Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your thoughts. Thank you for placing this in your favorites. :) Brandy

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/23/2019 7:27:00 AM

A very powerful scroll, how often we feel this way when we are enraptured with someone, Nice poetry today, Have a good one, and thank you for sharing your talent.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/23/2019 10:03:00 AM

Thank you Pixie. Love is a powerful emotion, as it can leave one breathless. In absolute bliss. I hope you have a wonderful day. Many blessings to you. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/23/2019 6:17:00 AM

Wow...the desire of many to give in to love...and it's in the breath of life...You capture the emotion...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/23/2019 9:42:00 AM

Such a wonderful way to view love. As, "A breath of life" Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Thank you Arturo. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 4/22/2019 11:26:00 PM

Very alluring, even a little seductive. Another very fetching little scribble.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/22/2019 11:46:00 PM

Very exhilarating collecting a moment such as this. Thank you Lawrence. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy