Continuance

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Image of Free Heart And Love by Pixabay. Continuance Climbing waves crept ashore and stole our footsteps yet prints went aslant, surrendered none to our unbroken hearts in bottled notes cast adrift ~~boundless praised afar Country road, a bit bumpy, grassy, pressed ground yet spontaneous passion stays eternal matching close limitless decorative spread ~~tough and tamed amour Curtains flounce in the wake of teasing zephyrs yet our infinite spirits perpetuates as the energies overwhelm and control ~~our love is endless Chaotic episodes choke in riddled voids worthless babble festers o'er empty pages yet unsung strength fills the bottomless inkwell ~~unwavering writes Coins flick to the bottom of a wishing well ere sparkles, hopes hang on first in the night sky candles on cakes, wishbone breaks, touch blue come true, ~~us everlasting 2021 June 04 *1st Place* All Yours (June 14) ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 June 13 *2nd Place* Writing Prompt - Endless ~~Constance La France: Judged 2021 June 13

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Constance La France

Date: 6/19/2021 12:37:00 PM

William, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Endless - Challenge with this wonderful poem and I liked the image and recording also, peace _Constance

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/19/2021 11:38:00 PM

A wondrous message to come home to, Constance, after a similar eventful day with old friends, many thanks truly my friend, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/14/2021 10:42:00 AM

Just lovely William. So vividly visual and visceral capturing every sense following the journey of love. I love the image of the waves capturing your footprints. Congratulations on your win! Aloha! Blessings my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/14/2021 8:59:00 PM

As I said, 'true blue' tis rare and few, Sam, and that you are the gilt of daybreak and the flash ere nightfall my friend, ke Akua pu (God bless you), Aloha!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/13/2021 10:38:00 AM

No words for your works. Great. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/13/2021 11:03:00 AM

I am grateful, Christuraj, for your words, Aloha!

Jack Horne

Date: 6/9/2021 11:48:00 AM

a sure win in Constance's contest - lovely

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/11/2021 10:39:00 AM

Thanks, Jack, for the uplift my friend, Aloha!