Contest

Call out to the muses, Construct a good story, Choose words that paint pictures, Color vivid wordscapes, Create bold metaphors, Combine beautiful sounds, Count all your syllables. This was written for contest Pleiades C- only I never submitted it.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/17/2018 3:46:00 PM

Well constructed, Agnes.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/26/2016 2:33:00 PM

This is lovely, and it would have surely been on the winners' list, Agnes! Always check your entries because glitches do occur....so disappointing:( Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/26/2016 7:43:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Paul. I know this won't happen to me again ;)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/26/2016 1:37:00 AM

Shoot,I thought this one would be on the list Agnes. It seems to fit the criteria. Oh, I just read what you said to Andrea. Sorry you didn't get this entered. I liked it a lot. ; )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2016 7:55:00 PM

I still like it a lot. I don't see a win for it. Sorry for that , Agnes

Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/25/2016 8:42:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, that's so sweet of you. The weird thing is that I can't see it on my contest entry page - so either the computer ate my entry, or I never actually submitted it. I was pretty bummed to discover that it didn't ever end up IN the contest, because I wrote it specifically for it (one doesn't come up with stuff like this otherwise). Oh well, it was good exercise.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2016 2:41:00 AM

Agnes, an excellent example of a great pleiades and this one shines! 7 ; )

Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/25/2016 9:23:00 PM

Thanks, Connie.