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Contemplation

CONTEMPLATION Mantra Then flashes of light in virtual space Soul’s inner kingdom Racing feet Without form or meat yet A sense of wholeness prevails You here you there you everywhere! A wish to quietly shout yet No lips no box no guts to let it out But there is color – beyond the rainbow There is sound – flutes trumpets a thousand violins - all round and There is naught but being No identifying clouds This revelation – You are in your closet Beyond carnal sensation - Contemplation ………………………………………………………..*Jesus said, “Go into your closet.”

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Date: 3/21/2013 4:19:00 PM
Howdee, sir. Thank you for dropping by, hope you are well.
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Date: 3/20/2013 12:17:00 AM
Daver, is this the kind of thing you were saying you could not do at PFT? It does look so cool to be able to format it this way. You do so well with line breaks. Good one!
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Date: 3/18/2013 8:31:00 PM
I can feel the sensation of the depth of your meditation Dave. I've discovered in scripture the deepest of mantra.....'fasting'....so I derive, and do believe! Fantastic write dear poet ! Have a wonderful begining to Spring my friend....much love, james
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Date: 3/17/2013 7:33:00 PM
Procrastination always has its good aspects, this is wonderful! Love this descriptive contemplation, Daver. You've captured its essence and are able to bring it into words. Interesting write...thank you for sharing.:) Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Date: 3/17/2013 5:20:00 PM
I'll go into a closet anytime if I could experience the sensations I find in your poem Dave. As it is, I am so fragmented outside as truth and confidence are elusive. Outstanding verse I connect with as it speaks to me. Love, Lizzy
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Date: 3/17/2013 7:08:00 AM
Dave, I admire your use of layout and your profound use of words, very creative and visually stunning, real poetry, well done, constance
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