Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Contemplating Father

Darrel Smith Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Contemplating Father which was written by poet Darrel Smith. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Darrel Smith

Best Darrel Smith Poems

+ Fav Poet

Contemplating Father

Your face is vague, but,
I remember the smell of your hands,
the smell of tobacco, beer, and sweat.
For us to talk it must
be before noon or the beer
(so strong on your breath)
would turn you from savant to idiot.

The wars of life had made you solemn;
Korea, Vietnam, dark dreams
and bad health,
you paid high for that strange wisdom.
And you were so hard to reach,
like those wise men that they say
sit on mountains.

Your mountain was alcohol.
Just Enough beer
and you might say great things,
to little, you were sullen and quiet,
to much, you were boisterous and insane.

Just days before you died 
in heavily gestured  speech 
your hand brushed my face 
as you spoke passionately
of revelations like they were today’s 

You spoke with certainty… of reality,
but all I remember is the smell
of your hand,
the smell of tobacco, beer, and sweat.

Copyright © Darrel Smith

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 8:44:00 PM
    You've gone and made me cry, Darell...May his soul rest in from all the torments, disappointments...everything. I believe that we will see our loved ones ! This is a beautiful tribute and I know he loves it! Well done. Annalise