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Contemplating

It is the winter of my life And I don't need To plant a seed Or pluck a weed. In fall and winter I stay in. It is too cold. Jack Frost is bold And I am old. There was a time when winter palled, I longed for spring But here's the thing I've lost my zing. Now I'm content to rest awhile To sit and wait To contemplate The world's sad state. It is your turn, dear younger friends, To face the cold Reach for the gold You're not yet old. If I've produced a line or two Said something new Inspired and true. 'Twill have to do.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/29/2014 6:05:00 PM
Joyce,,, Double Congrats on Carolyn’s birthday contest. Many smiles, on its future feature in her birthday booklet. XOX~ Linda
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Date: 5/29/2014 4:02:00 PM
Hilarious! Congratulations on a fabulous win, Joyce! Love, Annalise
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:14:00 PM
Congrats on the well deserved top placement, Joyce!!
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Date: 5/27/2014 1:34:00 PM
IVe lost my zing too. how funny my dear..congrats on a great win. BG
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Date: 5/27/2014 9:36:00 AM
Nicely done in rhyme, Joyce! Congrats on a top win! // paul
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:04:00 AM
Liked your rhyme, Joyce. Might be some double meanings in the first stanza, too? Congratulations!
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Date: 5/27/2014 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Joyce
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Date: 5/26/2014 8:38:00 PM
Joyce, Congratulations, in Carolyn's "Birthday and Aging Humor" contest. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/26/2014 7:02:00 PM
Congrats on this wonderfully written first place win !!!
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Date: 5/26/2014 5:20:00 PM
Nice Joyce. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Quite enjoyed zin you have. Verlena
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Date: 5/26/2014 4:27:00 PM
Dear Joyce, Congratulations on your first-place win! I really enjoy your sense of humor. "Senior Moments" will be featured in its entirety in the booklet and a large portion of this will be featured as well. Love, Carolyn
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