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Peacefully playful he pleasantly progresses Wistfully wishful she whispers sweet willingness Mystically mindful he mesmerized motionless Lustfully lying she lavishes loveliness Together they create triumphant tenderness (In Dactyllic Tetrameter) 4/27/2016

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Date: 4/30/2016 5:21:00 PM
Delicately sensual with fabulous alliterations. Well crafted my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 4/30/2016 6:25:00 PM
Thx for the support Keith. Your words are encouraging. I'm excited to experience some of your writing!
Date: 4/28/2016 12:56:00 PM
wow.... wonderful words in your amazing acrostic Lukas:-) hugs jan xx
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